Richard Lamoureux Poet Blitz

Lips Forever Joined

Kiss me passionately
Kiss with untetherd lips
Lips that are ripe
Lips that long to know everything
Everything waits for it's time
Everything has possibilities
Possibilities beyond limitations
Possibilities are laying in wait
Wait for me to come to you
Wait for my inexperienced touch
Touch me till you feel my longing
Touch the depth of your own wanting
Wanting and needing
Wanting that hurts
Hurts with a burning pleasure
Hurts with an ancient desire
Desire beyond our understanding
Desire that will not be contained
Contained you have been forced to be
Contained within your fathers image of innocence
Innocence must lead to mutual pleasure
Innocence is the doorway to your awakening 
Awakening your true essence
Awakening the power of your being
Being more
Being a true force of your own nature
Nature and nurture
Nature will give way to trancendence 
Trancendence to womanhood
Trancendence to your power
Power resides within your spirit
Power caresses your being
Being free to explore
Being aware of the moments
Moments that you will cherish
Moments shared with me
Me who wishes to know you
Me who has waited
Waited for you to be ready
Waited for our wedding day
Day after day imagining
Day and night you are part of my dreams
Dreams do come true
Dreams offer hope
Hope permeates our being
Hope that we will have forever
Forever can be felt in a moment
Forever pulses within your veins
Veins that carry the blood of our children
Moment by moment witness our becoming



For Justin Bordner's innocence contest.

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Manmath Dalei April 29, 2016 at 11:06 PM Dear Richard, This is an outstanding blitz. I adore ur skill.Glad to read ur words..............hugs Richard Lamoureux April 30, 2016 at 9:23 AM Thanks again Manmath.

Carmine Rossi June 12, 2015 at 11:36 AM Interesting. Nicely written and to read. Richard Lamoureux April 30, 2016 at 9:23 AM Sorry Carmine, a belated thanks.

Pandita Sietesantos June 2, 2015 at 5:32 PM This excellent Blitz deserves to be a winner! I am in awe of your artful expressions in this piece! Love it and rate it a solid "7!" Pandita Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2015 at 5:46 PM That is sweet Pandita. Thanks.

Kp Nunez May 28, 2015 at 6:19 AM It's odd that I haven't commented on this. I know I did. I haven't noticed that it didn't go through? Let me just repeat what I said before. The beauty of your blitz leaves this reader breathless! A 7 . Congratulations on your win, Rick! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading of the winning writes. Richard Lamoureux May 28, 2015 at 8:04 AM No apology required, I am so far behind I can never catch up. Thanks for your visit and for the seven.

Eve Roper May 19, 2015 at 8:52 PM wonderful write, Rick, congratulations on your win Richard Lamoureux May 20, 2015 at 9:08 AM Thanks Eve.

Joe Maverick May 19, 2015 at 5:29 PM Well done here Richard, best wishes on the H M..' Richard Lamoureux May 20, 2015 at 9:07 AM Thanks Joe.

Skat A May 19, 2015 at 9:34 AM RICHARD:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT* Richard Lamoureux May 20, 2015 at 9:06 AM Does that mean it was not worthy of the honor???

Cecilia Macfarlane May 17, 2015 at 7:12 PM A lovely and beautiful poem about innocence and true love and how the wait is so worth it. : ). Excellent write! Hugs Richard Lamoureux May 17, 2015 at 9:33 PM Thanks Cecilia.

Monterey Sirak May 17, 2015 at 9:32 AM Definitely a winner! I love it all, but especially the line "Forever can be felt in a moment" It is those rare, special and profound moments that we live for. Richard Lamoureux May 17, 2015 at 9:36 AM So true.

David Meade May 15, 2015 at 11:59 PM Wow! Outstanding creativity combined with a powerful message! One word: Fantastic!!7 Richard Lamoureux May 16, 2015 at 7:29 AM Thanks David, you are kind.

Arthur Vaso May 15, 2015 at 9:28 PM I have to admit, when I was a kid, I liked this girl, and I can tell you, if you want your lips forever joined, Crazy Glue is not the answer!!! Yes I came back to read this gem once again! Richard Lamoureux May 16, 2015 at 7:31 AM I have a friend who's lips are forever joined on his boss's ass, I wonder if he used crazy glue???

Kelly Deschler May 14, 2015 at 11:05 PM Good things come to those who wait... You've beautifully expressed so many relatable emotions here. Very nicely penned, Rick. Good luck in Justin's contest! Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2015 at 7:44 AM Thanks Kelly.

Arthur Vaso May 14, 2015 at 9:38 PM Great form, loved this style and of course the poem it self, the last 4 lines, very powerful! Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2015 at 7:45 AM Thanks my friend.

Poet Tacito May 14, 2015 at 4:25 PM Visceral in its loving intensity. It's been a long while, my good man. This was wonderful. Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2015 at 7:47 AM So good to hear from you Drake, this place is not the same without you!

Constance La France May 14, 2015 at 4:20 PM Richard, wow you did a remarkable job with the Blitz, it is like one long, long thought, wonderful 7, I am going to try doing another blitz poem and thanks for visiting my poem, Broken Wings Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2015 at 7:49 AM Thanks Constance it was my objective to maintain a consistent flow of thought. Often the blitz for takes you in many directions.

Wilma Neels May 14, 2015 at 9:30 AM The flow of this gem is absolutely brilliant Richard and you made it look so easy as well. Needless today I enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. Wishing you the best for the contest :) Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2015 at 7:50 AM Thanks for your kind words Wilma.

Skat A May 13, 2015 at 11:56 AM full of passion, enjoyed your write, good luck on the contest, ~luv, SKAT~ Richard Lamoureux May 13, 2015 at 3:14 PM Thanks SKAT!

Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 11:51 AM Simply outstanding Richard and I love the form you have used - yes it is worth waiting for the right one - sadly this seems to be a thing of the past with many youngsters I am afraid hence the reason we still have teenage mums at our school:-) Hugs Jan xx Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux May 13, 2015 at 3:16 PM It is a sad tale. Today there are friends with benefits.

Charmaine Chircop May 13, 2015 at 9:37 AM This reminds me of the many boyfriends I had,but I waited,I waited till that day I wore my white dress ,I waited for the one that I loved, I waited for that matrimonial day when we sealed our love.It was that night He undressed my innocence,It was then I tasted the power of passion mixed with the giving of love..It was a beautiful feeling I wont ever forget.This poem is so amazingly pure and describes all the pure and innocent touch.A fav Charmaine Chircop May 13, 2015 at 4:46 PM Hi dear Eileen..I was brought up in such believes..Dont know if they were good or bad,but in those days I felt it was the right choice.I had quite some boyfriends before my husband,if i slept with all the guys,I would have felt cheap,but on the othwrhand,the only man i really got to know on deep levels is my husband...To be honest ,I dnt know if i should pass my same values to my child when She grows up,orr if I should let her taste more of the world..Yes nowadays many even live together before marriage on the isle..Oh god things are changing fast and i do feel a bit archaic a lot of times,lol :.) Richard Lamoureux May 13, 2015 at 9:50 AM I am pleased that you experienced the colors of love in such amazing and meaningful way. In today's world this is a rare and beautiful experience. Eileen Manassian May 13, 2015 at 9:45 AM Oooops....Sorry Charmaine. My post jumped up here. I had written something along the same lines that you did here. I can understand....I deleted it. People these days think that that is archaic. I'm glad you had the courage to post about it. I started and stopped. Hugs Eileen Manassian May 13, 2015 at 9:43 AM This poem is so deep and there is so much I could write about it. I wrote and deleted another post. Just doesn't come out right. I'll just say again....wonderful. One of your absolutely absolute best...and blitz poems are NOT easy. Hugs

Eileen Manassian May 13, 2015 at 9:36 AM Oh...Richard....honestly, whatever I say will not be able to capture my feelings about this write. I see it's for Justin's contest. I hope he looks with favor on this write because it's awesome....I will share with you my favorite lines, if I may. No, I can't....It's just all too good. Hugs Richard Lamoureux May 13, 2015 at 9:53 AM I could not ask for a better reaction to this piece, thanks Eileen. Yes it is a challenging form to maintain a coherant line of thought. Hugs back to you Eileen.