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Lips Forever Joined

Kiss me passionately Kiss with untetherd lips Lips that are ripe Lips that long to know everything Everything waits for it's time Everything has possibilities Possibilities beyond limitations Possibilities are laying in wait Wait for me to come to you Wait for my inexperienced touch Touch me till you feel my longing Touch the depth of your own wanting Wanting and needing Wanting that hurts Hurts with a burning pleasure Hurts with an ancient desire Desire beyond our understanding Desire that will not be contained Contained you have been forced to be Contained within your fathers image of innocence Innocence must lead to mutual pleasure Innocence is the doorway to your awakening Awakening your true essence Awakening the power of your being Being more Being a true force of your own nature Nature and nurture Nature will give way to trancendence Trancendence to womanhood Trancendence to your power Power resides within your spirit Power caresses your being Being free to explore Being aware of the moments Moments that you will cherish Moments shared with me Me who wishes to know you Me who has waited Waited for you to be ready Waited for our wedding day Day after day imagining Day and night you are part of my dreams Dreams do come true Dreams offer hope Hope permeates our being Hope that we will have forever Forever can be felt in a moment Forever pulses within your veins Veins that carry the blood of our children Moment by moment witness our becoming For Justin Bordner's innocence contest.

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/29/2016 11:06:00 PM

Dear Richard, This is an outstanding blitz. I adore ur skill.Glad to read ur words..............hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2016 9:23:00 AM

Thanks again Manmath.

Carmine Rossi

Date: 6/12/2015 11:36:00 AM

Interesting. Nicely written and to read.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2016 9:23:00 AM

Sorry Carmine, a belated thanks.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/2/2015 5:32:00 PM

This excellent Blitz deserves to be a winner! I am in awe of your artful expressions in this piece! Love it and rate it a solid "7!" Pandita

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2015 5:46:00 PM

That is sweet Pandita. Thanks.

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/28/2015 6:19:00 AM

It's odd that I haven't commented on this. I know I did. I haven't noticed that it didn't go through? Let me just repeat what I said before. The beauty of your blitz leaves this reader breathless! A 7 . Congratulations on your win, Rick! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading of the winning writes.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2015 8:04:00 AM

No apology required, I am so far behind I can never catch up. Thanks for your visit and for the seven.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/19/2015 8:52:00 PM

wonderful write, Rick, congratulations on your win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2015 9:08:00 AM

Thanks Eve.

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/19/2015 5:29:00 PM

Well done here Richard, best wishes on the H M..'

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2015 9:07:00 AM

Thanks Joe.

Skat A

Date: 5/19/2015 9:34:00 AM

RICHARD:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT*

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2015 9:06:00 AM

Does that mean it was not worthy of the honor???

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/17/2015 7:12:00 PM

A lovely and beautiful poem about innocence and true love and how the wait is so worth it. : ). Excellent write! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 9:33:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/17/2015 9:32:00 AM

Definitely a winner! I love it all, but especially the line "Forever can be felt in a moment" It is those rare, special and profound moments that we live for.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 9:36:00 AM

So true.

David Meade

Date: 5/15/2015 11:59:00 PM

Wow! Outstanding creativity combined with a powerful message! One word: Fantastic!!7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2015 7:29:00 AM

Thanks David, you are kind.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/15/2015 9:28:00 PM

I have to admit, when I was a kid, I liked this girl, and I can tell you, if you want your lips forever joined, Crazy Glue is not the answer!!! Yes I came back to read this gem once again!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2015 7:31:00 AM

I have a friend who's lips are forever joined on his boss's ass, I wonder if he used crazy glue???

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/14/2015 11:05:00 PM

Good things come to those who wait... You've beautifully expressed so many relatable emotions here. Very nicely penned, Rick. Good luck in Justin's contest!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2015 7:44:00 AM

Thanks Kelly.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/14/2015 9:38:00 PM

Great form, loved this style and of course the poem it self, the last 4 lines, very powerful!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2015 7:45:00 AM

Thanks my friend.

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/14/2015 4:25:00 PM

Visceral in its loving intensity. It's been a long while, my good man. This was wonderful.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2015 7:47:00 AM

So good to hear from you Drake, this place is not the same without you!

Constance La France

Date: 5/14/2015 4:20:00 PM

Richard, wow you did a remarkable job with the Blitz, it is like one long, long thought, wonderful 7, I am going to try doing another blitz poem and thanks for visiting my poem, Broken Wings

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2015 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Constance it was my objective to maintain a consistent flow of thought. Often the blitz for takes you in many directions.

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/14/2015 9:30:00 AM

The flow of this gem is absolutely brilliant Richard and you made it look so easy as well. Needless today I enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. Wishing you the best for the contest :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2015 7:50:00 AM

Thanks for your kind words Wilma.

Skat A

Date: 5/13/2015 11:56:00 AM

full of passion, enjoyed your write, good luck on the contest, ~luv, SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2015 3:14:00 PM

Thanks SKAT!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2015 11:51:00 AM

Simply outstanding Richard and I love the form you have used - yes it is worth waiting for the right one - sadly this seems to be a thing of the past with many youngsters I am afraid hence the reason we still have teenage mums at our school:-) Hugs Jan xx Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2015 3:16:00 PM

It is a sad tale. Today there are friends with benefits.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/13/2015 9:37:00 AM

This reminds me of the many boyfriends I had,but I waited,I waited till that day I wore my white dress ,I waited for the one that I loved, I waited for that matrimonial day when we sealed our love.It was that night He undressed my innocence,It was then I tasted the power of passion mixed with the giving of love..It was a beautiful feeling I wont ever forget.This poem is so amazingly pure and describes all the pure and innocent touch.A fav

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/13/2015 4:46:00 PM

Hi dear Eileen..I was brought up in such believes..Dont know if they were good or bad,but in those days I felt it was the right choice.I had quite some boyfriends before my husband,if i slept with all the guys,I would have felt cheap,but on the othwrhand,the only man i really got to know on deep levels is my husband...To be honest ,I dnt know if i should pass my same values to my child when She grows up,orr if I should let her taste more of the world..Yes nowadays many even live together before marriage on the isle..Oh god things are changing fast and i do feel a bit archaic a lot of times,lol :.)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2015 9:50:00 AM

I am pleased that you experienced the colors of love in such amazing and meaningful way. In today's world this is a rare and beautiful experience.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/13/2015 9:45:00 AM

Oooops....Sorry Charmaine. My post jumped up here. I had written something along the same lines that you did here. I can understand....I deleted it. People these days think that that is archaic. I'm glad you had the courage to post about it. I started and stopped. Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/13/2015 9:43:00 AM

This poem is so deep and there is so much I could write about it. I wrote and deleted another post. Just doesn't come out right. I'll just say again....wonderful. One of your absolutely absolute best...and blitz poems are NOT easy. Hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/13/2015 9:36:00 AM

Oh...Richard....honestly, whatever I say will not be able to capture my feelings about this write. I see it's for Justin's contest. I hope he looks with favor on this write because it's awesome....I will share with you my favorite lines, if I may. No, I can't....It's just all too good. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2015 9:53:00 AM

I could not ask for a better reaction to this piece, thanks Eileen. Yes it is a challenging form to maintain a coherant line of thought. Hugs back to you Eileen.