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Line inspiration poetry contest

Tangerine sunsets composing chrysanthemum hymns what has become of me and my 'not quite' sins The vision of demise orchestratated for evening viewing what has become of me I'll be my own undoing Last thoughts of cerulean all blue and mysterious unsaved yet compelling washed up and delirious 3

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Shane Thacker

Date: 4/29/2024 5:24:00 PM

I wanted so badly to write for this contest and for this line in particular. You've written such an amazing poem with it, Di11y.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/29/2024 10:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Shane, this was a late night scribble that I'd all but forgotten about when I woke up. It was interesting for me to use as it's far away from my typical word choices (fruit colours are a rarity). Glad you liked it, thanks for your comment :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/27/2024 11:08:00 PM

Enjoyed this poem. Good luck with the contest.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/27/2024 11:24:00 PM

Thanks Hilda x