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Limerick: Once a Stud Stallion In Wild Mare Charge

Limerick : Once a Stud Stallion in wild Mare charge for Rick Zablocki (as promised from the horse’s mouth) Once a Stud Stallion in wild Mare charge Didn’t see his gear was far too large Hit goal right smack in poke Mare humped : It in two broke Since then in stud-farm draws dunged-straw barge. © T. Wignesan – Paris, 2013

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/14/2013 1:15:00 AM

ha ha....that is the danger these stallions run but try telling them that. SuZ

T Wignesan
Date: 5/14/2013 12:23:00 PM

Hi Suzanne! Welcome! Selamat Datang! Bienvenue! How right you are! It's about time stallions let the mares run this world. Look, what a mess we are in! Mares with their maternal instinct would bring up the "pony people" like their own "cuddly children". Only trouble is that the world could also - in the wrong hands - become a real "bordel", should the femmes fatales take over. Every good wish. Wignesan

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/3/2013 9:11:00 PM

Lol, Master of Limericks. A fine tribute to Rick, my friend. Since enjoying yours I'm trying my hand at limericks. I find them kinda difficult. No mind. I'll get there yet. My attempt along your lines: There once was a stud farm whose mare // when meeting her match was well-scared // on insertion she dipped // its pride in two snipped // bisected, he's now career-impaired. You know me: as bawdy as they come (lol). My very best to you, Poe-T. Licia :)

T Wignesan
Date: 5/4/2013 4:07:00 AM

Hey, u there, Licia! Trying to put one over me, eh? At this rate, I'll have to cede my place to you. Once again, you make me feel abashed. Very many thanks. By the by, I left a couple of notes for you about your innate talents, that is, on your "Burns stanza" and "standard Heppie "variations. Did you see them? So, my "bawdy" friend, try and up-bawdy me. Every good wish. Wignesan