Constance La France Poet Limerick

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Limerick- Humming-Bird

I wish that I was a red humming-BIRD,
I would twirl and swirl 'till I was blurred;

because this girl cannot dance,
my moves are more of a prance;

better a bird than a dancer absurd !

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May 2,  2018


Poetry/Limerick/Humming-BIRD
Copyright Protected, ID 18-10180983-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym

Written for the contest, I Wish I Was A,
sponsor, Viv Wigley

Fourth Place

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Jan Allison May 7, 2018 at 6:15 PM Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2018 at 5:19 PM This is SO cute, Constance. BIG congrats to our dancing poetess!

Viv Wigley May 7, 2018 at 12:04 PM Congrats, Constance,and thanks for entering. I've tried to imitate the ballerina in your visual and it mat be a while before I can sit straight :)

Line Gauthier May 7, 2018 at 11:26 AM Congrats on your win, BW.

Alexis Y. May 7, 2018 at 8:15 AM Hi BW, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 7, 2018 at 7:55 AM Giggles :) funny and adorable! I love it! Congratulations dear poetess. xomo!

Susan Gentry May 7, 2018 at 6:02 AM Back to congratulate you on your placement. Short, sweet. Enjoyed it.

Subimal Sinha-Roy May 7, 2018 at 3:06 AM Congratulations, Constance on your win.

Michelle Faulkner May 4, 2018 at 10:30 AM I love hummingbirds - and your words dance quite well!

Susan Gentry May 3, 2018 at 2:27 AM Cute and clever. :)

Kim Rodrigues May 2, 2018 at 10:42 PM Very interesting images in a unique limerick!

Jan Allison May 2, 2018 at 4:35 PM fun poem Constance!:-) hugs jan xx