Limerence Premiere Contest Winner

Between the sheets she melts in his adoring touch, infatuation brought forth by strong passion as such. Above the realm of intuition they sneak in the bed, so much is tenderly spoken with lustful words unsaid. From attraction to romance they fell in obsession so deep, for it was so intense they never made the time to sleep. Beyond adoration they knew desire called their names, and into each other’s delight their mania couldn’t be tamed. Free from distraction the crush turned into fascination, quickly they became one without pause or procrastination. Eyes gaped in magnetism with two souls thirsty for water, for if it was nothing but enticement he ever taught her. The world became small and their room became home, this time was for real, neither would ever be alone. Allurement from her eyes called his lips to gently kiss, for gravity has pulled two lovers away from amiss. Temptation was created from the brush of her hair, and since then the inducement started a frenzy flare. Charisma and charm taught them love in the making, no matter the circumstance for each other they were aching. Time spent together brought them to the alter for vows, and eternity rests in the hands of the Lord who allows. True intimacy is born from the heart of pure attraction, from them a baby was birthed from two lover’s interaction. Date Written: July 11, 2016

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Date: 1/2/2017 8:07:00 PM
Back again, Laura, to congratulate you on another win for this wonderful poem! And, best wishes for a healthy and happy new year! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/1/2017 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations, Laura!
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Date: 12/31/2016 1:32:00 PM
A winner again, Luloo! Congrats! Janice
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Date: 7/25/2016 9:33:00 AM
Whew! I had to fan myself before responding! LOL! Seriously, congrats on your WELL-deserved win, Luloo. Janice
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Date: 7/25/2016 12:46:00 PM
lol! thanks Janice :)-luloo
Date: 7/23/2016 3:14:00 AM
Lovely win!
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Date: 7/23/2016 10:50:00 AM
thank you James :)-luloo
Date: 7/22/2016 6:23:00 PM
Congrats Laura, This poem is wonderfully written. I really enjoyed reading it......Roger Horsch
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Date: 7/22/2016 10:32:00 PM
thank you Roger :)-luloo
Date: 7/22/2016 7:33:00 AM
Lovely, Laura xoxo
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Date: 7/22/2016 9:12:00 AM
thank you Kim :)-luloo
Date: 7/22/2016 6:47:00 AM
Sweet love story, congratulations LuLoo...
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Date: 7/22/2016 9:12:00 AM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 7/22/2016 12:19:00 AM
a tale of deep passion and romance told with eloquence - congratulations on this champion poem!
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Date: 7/22/2016 9:11:00 AM
thank you Michael :)-luloo
Date: 7/21/2016 6:34:00 PM
Lovely, Luloo. Congratulations on your Trophy First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:55:00 PM
thank lovely lady Sandra! Be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 7/21/2016 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the first placement of the contest
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:53:00 PM
oh my, thank you so much Nayda, I am over the moon with joy...be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 7/15/2016 9:06:00 AM
Yes, a healthy progress between two lovers. Evidently one must read the contest rules to fine out what limerence means. Luck in the contest. daver
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Date: 7/13/2016 3:55:00 PM
This is really a very nice poem. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend with a nice 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/12/2016 9:03:00 AM
this is so sweet. I love how you ended it with marriage and baby carriage! VERY well done, dear Laura.
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Date: 7/12/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you sweet lady:)-luloo
Date: 7/11/2016 1:33:00 PM
Laura, this poem is romantically beautiful and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 7/11/2016 1:43:00 PM
thank you Broken Wings :)-luloo
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