Limbo

Laying in bed being aimless doesn't help I'm losing my mind in such a soothing way Magically resetting Bargaining on memory loss Overriding all for serenities pull

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David Kavanagh

Date: 5/30/2024 1:13:00 PM

In limbo land Dilly, Hilda’s comment is golden, laid back style is indeed what it takes to get under the bar, no problem to you lol! Bargaining on memory loss, yes it does fade over time, so now I’m gonna set fire to the limbo bar, just to help you get a little more laid back, nice acrostic, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/30/2024 1:24:00 PM

Haha who'd have thought the comment thread on this one could cheer me up nicely :) where there's a will there's a way - I'm going to have the limbo song in my head all night now lol

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2024 10:16:00 AM

Your "Limbo" is a powerful Acrostic write. A story in just 5 lines. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/30/2024 1:22:00 PM

Thanks Paula x

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/30/2024 9:44:00 AM

A laid back style is felt I'm this poem. It is an enticing idea.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/30/2024 1:22:00 PM

Haha good one Hilda :D