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Lilacs Plead

like hanged tresses
ground's scented wig —
purple boundless

beautyflowergrowthinnocenceinspirationalthan-bauk

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Alesia Leach

Date: 5/23/2025 5:16:00 PM

This one stings quietly--elegant, eerie, and deeply felt. “Like hanged tresses” is such a vivid, haunting image. You distilled grief and bloom into three sharp lines. Chilling and beautiful.

Marikate Kingston

Date: 4/24/2025 6:17:00 PM

I LOVE your second line. Oh how clever, clever, clever.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/7/2024 6:34:00 AM

Ah.... purple is my favourite colour and you've done it proud with this beautiful piece. Nature thanks you ;) and so do I. Thank you for your visits to my work. Sorry I haven't responded. Not doing too well. Hope to be back when I'm better.

Gary Radice

Date: 9/28/2024 8:41:00 AM

The shorter the poem, the harder it is to convey depth of imagery but you have suceeded here with ease Paige. Well done. Cheers - Gary

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2024 7:48:00 AM

Pretty! Thank you for your untiring support of my poetry. So encouraging, dear Paige!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2024 10:49:00 PM

Very pretty. Her rules for this different version of than-bak might be different from how you did it. But maybe I am the one who didn't understand them!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/12/2024 9:14:00 PM

Oh good to know. Maybe I already saw it. Let me go see.

Paige Hind
Date: 9/12/2024 3:25:00 PM

I did it her way in my other Than-Bauk "Seaside Turn"- check that one out. Thanks for all your kindness my friend. :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/10/2024 11:37:00 AM

So9 descriptive, Paige, embracing the beauty of lilacs and the sadness when they are gone! Lilacs are one of my very favorite flowers. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/9/2024 4:53:00 PM

I love to see that purple carpet. It is something to look forward to.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/9/2024 1:30:00 AM

Your Than-Bauk is excellent. In such a short poem, you described lilacs well.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/8/2024 12:11:00 PM

Dear Paige, your vivid imagery is as beautiful as the lilacs themselves. Splendid poetry my dear poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 9/8/2024 11:58:00 AM

Lovely imagery here dear Paige..

Tom Woody

Date: 9/8/2024 11:52:00 AM

You help us envision the scene quite well Paige

Ink Empress

Date: 9/8/2024 8:50:00 AM

Dear sweet paige, i think youv mastered the art of doing this form now! How beautiful! And that title is so gorgeous! I love lilac! And i love how seamlessly your poem flows! Very well written, especially love “ ground's scented wig —” i can smell the scent! Love it! Pleasure reading your work always! Sending you light always