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Lilac Scents Surface

Lilac scents surface and I'm surrounded with a pleasant picture tap dancing upon a weathered soaked oak porch Bare shoulders showing carefree scars burnt skin deep seduction lingering along with a memory of summer love Roundabout days fast and furious feelings as the temperature rise inside secretly hidden drift away eyes Lilac scents surface in the breeze and I inhale every hint of you and my mind rolls back Flyaway moments held strong to soon departed gone wrong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/21/2017 10:52:00 AM
This one made my temperature rise.
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Date: 6/21/2017 6:47:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. This is very poetic and lovely. It is so gentle and soft. You deliver wonderful imagery and expression. I so enjoyed your title also. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful morning.
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Date: 6/20/2017 1:29:00 PM
Hi Tim , good summers day is great for getting the poet motivated , great write very enjoyable read :))))
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Date: 6/20/2017 12:29:00 AM
Beautiful summer memory my friend. Hold those memories close!
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Date: 6/19/2017 8:17:00 PM
Nothing brings back memories like a fragrance, good work Tim...
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Date: 6/19/2017 5:28:00 PM
Nothing is hotter than summer passion, Tim:) Those we never forget!
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Date: 6/19/2017 4:54:00 PM
There will always be certain scents that touch off memories.. A gentle, melancholy write, Tim.
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Date: 6/19/2017 3:24:00 PM
I love the image of rain tap-dancing. You are so clever.
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Date: 6/19/2017 3:08:00 PM
- Fragrances and memories ... of a time that is gone - Lovely poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/19/2017 2:53:00 PM
I love this Tim. I do love lilac and you have brought it into this poem so nicely. I like the line tap dancing on a weathered soaked oak porch :)
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Date: 6/19/2017 2:41:00 PM
lovely imagery and romantic memories Tim. i can imagine an old guy in a rocking porch staring at the sunset and reminiscing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/19/2017 2:35:00 PM
A lovely title to a lovely write, Tim! Great imagery mate!
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