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Like Tinsel From Trees

gathered on my windows this frostwork from last night's sketches becloud my vision like death overshadows my heart my spirit of holiday merriment was yanked like tinsel from trees and castaway in the fragments of yesteryears long passed i feel this wind as it wraps around me with the same chill as death's own hands suffocating me as i try to stand on worthless ground half frozen beneath my feet these shadows falling around me are as appealing as kissing lips of someone gone from life sometimes i wonder if they are here for me to take my body to join my soul on the other side where you all gather together without me at night intermittently i pray for peace of mind whatsoever that means yet come morning i stand on this same ground awaiting on time

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Date: 1/8/2020 12:44:00 PM
Sandy congratulations on your top win!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/8/2020 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Date: 1/7/2020 9:40:00 PM
I love this! Sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Sandra - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 1/8/2020 10:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Greg...best wishes for you in the new year as well... hugs :)
Date: 1/7/2020 3:21:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations! Powerful poem that captures the reader with phrases like "yanked like tinsel from trees and cast away." Very nice write, my friend.
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Date: 1/7/2020 7:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam :) hugs
Date: 12/13/2019 9:57:00 PM
Sad, but very well expressed. Poetic hugs.
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Date: 12/13/2019 11:08:00 PM
Thank you my friend....my muse seems to like the sadder side of life... hugs
Date: 12/13/2019 7:33:00 AM
Your imagery is fascinatingly lovely, Sandra. You had me at frost.
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Date: 12/13/2019 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren...this cold weather is driving my muse often these days :) hugs
Date: 12/12/2019 8:53:00 PM
You do have a way with words. Another poetic perfection.
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Date: 12/13/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert for such an awesome comment and the smile it brought :)
Date: 12/12/2019 7:11:00 PM
this one is very deep, Sandy. Such sad musing. I can only hope you are also feeling the cheer this year!
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Date: 12/12/2019 8:25:00 PM
I am great, just musing... you should know my muse by now.. thank you :) hugs
Date: 12/12/2019 3:17:00 PM
A deep piece, Sandra. Man, I know they can't wait to be with you again in a way that will bring you peace. In the meantime, you can still celebrate with them, in a different kind of way, until your life has come to its natural end. That's what they would want for you, I'm thinking. They celebrate you and your life here as they patiently await your arrival. Please do the same... Much love, my friend ~ hugs
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Date: 12/12/2019 6:46:00 PM
my muse seems to like the deep musings sometimes... winter's chill and the holidays remind me of all those gone... i make them all wreaths and other graveside gifts as my way of sharing the holidays with them...i am in good spirits... just deep penning... thank you... love and hugs :)
Date: 12/12/2019 1:58:00 PM
Another brilliant write from your gifted pen--the ebb and flow of emotions reign some days--as you eloquently depicted, Sandy.
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Date: 12/12/2019 6:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay... you know my muse and her deeper writes...if it's on an emotional level i can often deliver not always, but often... hugs :)
Date: 12/12/2019 1:47:00 PM
Darkness from the chill of winter brings with it loneliness. Beautifully expressed in your sad poem Sandra. Come vision me in Hawaii, it is still warm enough to swim in the ocean. Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/12/2019 6:43:00 PM
I will hurry and pack my bags... to visit there is a dream i hope to accomplish one day... it's bone chilling cold here again...a few days ago it was 53, then we got snow the next this weather is crazy... thank you so much my sweet friend! Hugs XoXo
Date: 12/12/2019 1:38:00 PM
Ooh. Penetrates to the bone... The vicious cycle portrayed is quite potent, Sandy!...Late-night chiller! :) gw
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Date: 12/12/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Gershon...just letting my muse run wild with thoughts on this chilly day... i dislike the cold...if you couldn't tell... hugs :)
Date: 12/12/2019 12:06:00 PM
Hi Sandra, You have beautifully expressed your theme, set in winter and juxtaposed it with holiday celebration. Such a nice pairing of opposites and the ambivalence of your feelings. There is a depth of emotion stated with eloquent simplicity.
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Date: 12/12/2019 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam...i think winter's cold gives us more time to reflect on life, and the holidays make us miss those gone more... glad you enjoyed the read :) hugs
Date: 12/12/2019 11:56:00 AM
I too have often thought about what it would be like crossing over, seeing those who I have lost but when the morning comes again and I see the sunrise and find greetings from dear friends I still have here, those thoughts disappear quickly. Your poem is somber my friend, the frigid shivers are felt as the loneliness gathers like snow on the frozen ground while all along the beauty of your talent thaws even the coldest heart. This was beautiful.
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Date: 12/12/2019 12:31:00 PM
I think as we age we all have these thoughts...the holidays sometimes bring their absence closer to the surface as they are missed at the festivities...but like you something always comes about in the dawning of a new day that leaves me breathless and makes me glad i am here...Thank you so much for your kind comment Chris... hugs

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