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Like the Tide

Kiss me, in slow motion Feel the tides of the ocean Pulling you closer Over and over The salty air likes to tease As the waves kiss and please The passion of love inside Moves with the rhythm, like the tide A touch that caresses slow As the tides come and go Drifting back and forth with the sea As your body collides with me Like the tide, you crash again In slow motion upon my skin Featured Poem- 8/7/2022

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Joseph May

Date: 6/26/2020 6:22:00 AM

"The passion of love inside Moves with the rhythm, like the tide", Wonderful write Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/26/2020 6:52:00 PM

I appreciate you reading this playful and passionate poem from my pen. Thank you Joseph. I am smiling. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 9/19/2018 10:49:00 AM

This is so very sensual, it leave me breathless...I love the line "kiss me in slow motion" John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/19/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thank you John. And kissing slow, is very sensual indeed, simply leaving me breathless. :) Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/8/2018 12:19:00 AM

Oh, this is lovely, and soft sensual, superbly written about my favorite thing in the world! I must add this to my favs, so I can read again when I'm down and forgetting the true treasures in life. Wonderful write, my friend, and thank you for sharing with me! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/8/2018 12:06:00 PM

Yes, there is something magical about the sea. It can create many breathtaking moments- even before love begins crashing endlessly. Your thoughts are a treasure. Thank you for adding this to your favorites, and for all your kind words. :) This poem certainly is about the sensual touches between lovers, and their passion. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 7/27/2018 1:14:00 PM

Kisses should always be done in slow motion...low tide, high tide, any tide. It just wouldn't be romantic if they weren't. A lovely and beautiful write, Brandy. Captivating! Charlie :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/27/2018 1:45:00 PM

Oh my!! So true are your thoughts. Sometimes, kisses say everything, plus so much more. Thank you Charles. I enjoyed writing this playful, sensual little scribble. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 7/20/2018 8:45:00 AM

Wonderful way of describing love making with the rising and falling of the tides. You have captured the energy and motions well. Hopefully the tide doesn't go out too quickly or their dingy may get caught on shore....TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/20/2018 12:02:00 PM

Thank you Tobey. :) Your thoughts made me smile and blush. There is sweet romance and passion around these words. Yes, the rise and fall of love colliding. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 6/24/2018 4:32:00 AM

Many reads and still I'm left.. speechless!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/24/2018 7:38:00 AM

I had no idea that you were reading this passionate poem, again and again. I am blown away. Thank you Lyric man. ~ Maia