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Like Grains Of Sand Minutes, they drift by each day, like grains of sand, slip by; how they fall and where they lay can make us laugh or cry. Every grain of sand upholds a memory to keep; like through an hourglass, unfolds our life into a heap. Minutes, they drift by each day, like grains of sand, slip by; Each will mold our life's pathway from birth until we die. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: 70 Words or Less Sponsor: Lu Loo Judged: 05/25/2017 Theme, Hourglass

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Date: 4/21/2019 11:38:00 PM
Great imagery, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/22/2019 4:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/20/2019 3:41:00 PM
A great and inspiring piece Sandra. Congratulations.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/22/2019 4:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, Samuel, for your visit, lovely comment and congrats. Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Date: 4/17/2019 5:06:00 AM
As I have gotten old I have realized how precious each fleeting moment of time is, we must always make the best of it. Congrats, Sandra. John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/17/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, John! I really appreciate your visit, supportive comment, and congrats! Sandra
Date: 5/27/2017 5:22:00 PM
Grains of sand like the ticking of the clock! Congrats, Sandra!
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:47:00 PM
I really like the topic you chose and how you did it. WELL done, Sandra!!
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Date: 5/13/2017 8:08:00 PM
Like the repeated form, the flow is wonderful, Sandra, good luck in the contest. ~*
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Date: 5/13/2017 7:23:00 PM
Time seems so elusive but when you watch the grains of sand slip by in an hour glass it makes you realize how fleeting time really is. A lovely poem Sandra. 7 ; )
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