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Like a Puppet

At first I thought it such a thrill the way he reached inside my dress I liked the way he stroked my hair and did things that I can't confess He made me speak such naughty words with readied open mouth and yes I liked it when he said, "Common, let's turn you south" Yes they watched him watching me as he did those things to me it was a freak show I admit, an entertainment fast and free... A peep show for the salty ones with eager hands and lusty eyes I do believe he had me strung with lots of push and pull and ties I was his puppet on a string and he my smooth Ventriloquist I love the way he blushed, as if he'd jsut been kissed... The End. June 19, 2018

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Date: 6/25/2018 7:20:00 PM
You've written a poem that is wicked and whimsical in the same breath. Would have thought it impossible before reading it. Congrats on your win! Well-deserved! ~ Gershon
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Date: 6/23/2018 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of many twists and turns! :)
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Date: 6/23/2018 3:12:00 PM
Congrats on your top win with this very colourful poem, Pixie.
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Date: 6/23/2018 9:42:00 AM
A creatively written poem with a great flow, Pixie, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:22:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem, very well written!
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Date: 6/20/2018 2:33:00 PM
Great poem for the contest Pixie.. You have to be careful of such manipulators.. they prey on the vulnerable..
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Date: 6/20/2018 7:07:00 AM
I am guessing this is not a metaphor for real life. You cleverly had the reader wander..glad he was not who I thought he was..brilliant way you presented your poem.
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