Mystic Rose Rose Poet Couplet

Like a Puppet

At first I thought it such a thrill the way he reached inside my dress 
I liked the way he stroked my hair and did things that I can't confess

He made me speak such naughty words with readied open mouth 
and yes I liked it when he said, "Common, let's turn you south" 

Yes they watched him watching me as he did those things to me 
it was a freak show I admit, an entertainment fast and free...

A peep show for the salty ones with eager hands and lusty eyes 
I do believe he had me strung with lots of push and pull and ties 

I was his puppet on a string and he my smooth Ventriloquist 
I love the way he blushed, as if he'd jsut been kissed... 

The End. 
June 19, 2018

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Gershon Wolf June 25, 2018 at 7:20 PM You've written a poem that is wicked and whimsical in the same breath. Would have thought it impossible before reading it. Congrats on your win! Well-deserved! ~ Gershon

Susan Gentry June 23, 2018 at 9:17 PM Congratulations on your win with this poem of many twists and turns! :)

Line Gauthier June 23, 2018 at 3:12 PM Congrats on your top win with this very colourful poem, Pixie.

John Gondolf June 23, 2018 at 9:42 AM A creatively written poem with a great flow, Pixie, congrats on your win. John

Tania Kitchin June 23, 2018 at 7:22 AM I enjoyed your poem, very well written!

Silent One June 20, 2018 at 2:33 PM Great poem for the contest Pixie.. You have to be careful of such manipulators.. they prey on the vulnerable..

Vijay Pandit June 20, 2018 at 7:07 AM I am guessing this is not a metaphor for real life. You cleverly had the reader wander..glad he was not who I thought he was..brilliant way you presented your poem.