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Like a Melody

Something emerging from Your system like a serene Melodious sound..... Something reaching me Strongly and captivating my Body and soul wholeheartedly. Something orchestrating the most Pleasant melodies, Leaving me with happiness And urging me to do more. Something like a melody, Reaching my everywhere And blending my thoughts Like the words of my mother.... Something like a melody Only you can give, Something like a melody Only you knows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/6/2011 7:42:00 AM
Like a melody indeed!!!This is beautiful Charles and such a romantic piece!!!i luv it!!!!
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Date: 8/25/2016 9:50:00 AM
thanks my sweetheart.
Date: 11/17/2010 8:50:00 AM
oo, emerging from the system,,, love the melody that hits the notes of your heart,,, very very captivation,, Charles, enjoyed the poem,,.p..d
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Date: 8/25/2016 9:51:00 AM
thanks so much my friend.
Date: 10/30/2010 6:37:00 PM
Lightly romantic and intense lines of this piece Charles.. some people have this affect on others.. mesmerizing and melodious charms ..they exude.. enjoyed your poetry with its creative theme Charles..
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:12:00 PM
Now this is a beautiful romantic write and well penned. God Bless Phyl
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