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Like a Melody

. . your breath lingers across my skin, and just like a dream - your kiss softly dances upon my lips, simply teasing my heart again while every sensation, brings my body in it is your endless love . . that truly captivates me --------------------- * simple moments * Form~ Decastitch Ten Lines ~ Rhyme and Meter is Optional

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Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2024 7:36:00 AM

"A kiss dances softly on your lips", in this romantic write Brandy, Wonderful write

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/14/2024 6:50:00 PM

So sweet of you to say, Joseph. Yes, a kiss softly caressing the lips is very romantic. So playful. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 9/10/2018 12:32:00 PM

Another winning piece....TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2018 6:45:00 PM

Awe, thank you Tobey. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 9/6/2018 12:53:00 PM

Lovely poem, Brandy. I also appreciate your using the "Decastich" form, which is new to me. It seems that the only requirement is the ten lines with no meter or rhyme patterns. This opens up a lot of possibilities :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/6/2018 3:58:00 PM

You are very welcome Mark.

Mark Toney
Date: 9/6/2018 2:10:00 PM

Thanks for the link!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/6/2018 1:28:00 PM

Awe, thank you Mark. I was introduced to this form many years ago. It is easy and of course you can write about anything. Here is a link to the form. The instructions are simple. Yes, the possibilities are endless. Brandy :) http://www.thepoetsgarret.com/2009Challenge/form10.html

Charles Messina

Date: 9/5/2018 11:28:00 AM

So romantic and beautiful, Brandy. A lovely well written Decastitch. Love this. ~Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/5/2018 1:10:00 PM

Thank you Charlie. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 9/5/2018 10:03:00 AM

Simple is alluring

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/5/2018 12:58:00 PM

:) Thank you Tim. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/5/2018 6:54:00 AM

Your words indeed are like melody..very soft and creative touch as always..excellent poetry, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/5/2018 12:57:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Your kind words bring a smile. I appreciate you. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/4/2018 10:32:00 PM

There is a difference, between the way a woman writes and the way a man writes...thank god I'm not a woman lol...(just kidding)...as men we could never write, I think, such sweet, beautiful, elegant and harmonious poems...that touch the heart deeper than most...only women have that power...so again, I say, thank god I'm not a woman...so I can enjoy their exquisite inner beauty, thru verse and other such ways...'vive la difference'...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/5/2018 12:57:00 PM

Thank you Winged Warrior! :) I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/5/2018 12:55:00 PM

That is a good thing then!! :) And- as a man, you certainly do write poetry that is intense. Those deep, dark emotions. I think most women write tender moments of love. I imagine you could as well. Let your heart curl around light, and its beauty. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/4/2018 10:36:00 PM

...oh yeah...your poem is not too bad lol...(just kidding)...it has the magical touch of a woman...I envy lol...^WW^

John Gondolf

Date: 9/4/2018 7:41:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, Brandy, love is like a soft song playing in the background of our heart as we gently sway to its rhythm. Your poetry truly captivates me. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/4/2018 7:52:00 PM

Yes, love is soooo many wonderful moments. :) Your thoughts are soft, sweet and poetic. Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/4/2018 7:20:00 PM

There's not more beautiful than a heart yearning for love... and a love yearning to explore ...even the breath of love...Nice write Brandy...All the best

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/4/2018 7:51:00 PM

You are right. That sweet ache does feel amazing. Even the lightest touch of love- can mean so much to the heart. Many blessings to you Arturo. Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Brandy