Like a Magnet

The sunshine, like a magnet,
Tries to draw me back outside
Though after my pre-sunrise walk,
My preference is to hide.

Within these walls I’ve made my place
And, in relaxing wear,
I’ve found enough to do so I 
Don’t need to go out there.

Yet when the sunlight dapples
All the buildings ‘cross the street,
That old familiar tug begins
And brings me to my feet.

I find some socks and bundle up,
My mask from eyes to chin,
And head outdoors to feel the sun
On just an inch of skin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcleod Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Great idea Ilene. I guess we all feel the draw of the sun. I only wish this poem was longer. I enjoyed it. Trevor
Leffanta Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 10:43 AM
But every woman knows an inch can make all the difference! Aloha! Rico
Borke Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 6:40 AM
I enjoy all your poems, but this one pulled a comment: Wonderful!
Wolf Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 6:25 PM
Ha, ha! I presume, of course, that the 'inch of skin' is somewhere around your navel. ~ I Can D.
Amadore Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 3:09 PM
An almost perfectly realized piece that is certain-to-be-popular and well-received. It deals with a nearly universal appreciation of sunny weather regardless of the season and encourages us all to emulate your activity. I enjoyed the read.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 12:46 PM
So funny how we bundle up just to get outside and feel the sun!
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 12:37 PM
Nothing beats the great outdoors and im even looking forward to going to the shops if it gets me out for an hour. Tom
Devonshire Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 12:36 PM
On "just an inch of skin." Wow! That's about right for this time of year in most places. Sunshine has been luring visitors to my state for decades. Sometimes before dusk, the sky turns pink and purple as it did last night. The color reflects off the sea and the river as well as homes. Had to see it outside. Enjoy your winter "sun-inspired" excursions outdoors! Best wishes, Carolyn
Pettit Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Great poem about my least favorite season.
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