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Like a Magnet

The sunshine, like a magnet, Tries to draw me back outside Though after my pre-sunrise walk, My preference is to hide. Within these walls I’ve made my place And, in relaxing wear, I’ve found enough to do so I Don’t need to go out there. Yet when the sunlight dapples All the buildings ‘cross the street, That old familiar tug begins And brings me to my feet. I find some socks and bundle up, My mask from eyes to chin, And head outdoors to feel the sun On just an inch of skin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/31/2021 7:48:00 AM
Great idea Ilene. I guess we all feel the draw of the sun. I only wish this poem was longer. I enjoyed it. Trevor
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Date: 1/29/2021 10:43:00 AM
But every woman knows an inch can make all the difference! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/29/2021 6:40:00 AM
I enjoy all your poems, but this one pulled a comment: Wonderful!
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Date: 1/28/2021 6:25:00 PM
Ha, ha! I presume, of course, that the 'inch of skin' is somewhere around your navel. ~ I Can D.
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Date: 1/28/2021 3:09:00 PM
An almost perfectly realized piece that is certain-to-be-popular and well-received. It deals with a nearly universal appreciation of sunny weather regardless of the season and encourages us all to emulate your activity. I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:46:00 PM
So funny how we bundle up just to get outside and feel the sun!
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:37:00 PM
Nothing beats the great outdoors and im even looking forward to going to the shops if it gets me out for an hour. Tom
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:36:00 PM
On "just an inch of skin." Wow! That's about right for this time of year in most places. Sunshine has been luring visitors to my state for decades. Sometimes before dusk, the sky turns pink and purple as it did last night. The color reflects off the sea and the river as well as homes. Had to see it outside. Enjoy your winter "sun-inspired" excursions outdoors! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:17:00 PM
Great poem about my least favorite season.
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