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Like a Gentle Breeze- Contest

Sparkling Is your radiant smile Like shimmering stars in the night sky Sizzling hot Is your masculine touch Like the sun’s heat in the Summertime Breathtaking Is your sweet kisses Like a gentle breeze upon lush lips Exquisite Is your allure Like beholding a lovely sunrise Contest: Images In Parallel Sponsor: Joseph 02/15/2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/16/2021 10:11:00 AM

Wow Alexis, love is in the air, your romantic writes are all awesome, one better than the last, best of luck in the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2021 6:50:00 AM

- Breathtaking is your poem, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/16/2021 5:18:00 AM

WoW! Perfect entry for contest. Beautifully penned. Was not planning to participate, but after your example I will. Any form that allows such beautiful poem should be tried. Adding this to fav. God bless. Take care, Rama

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/16/2021 9:25:00 AM

Hi Rama, Thank you so much for such a comment. I happy me when a fellow poet gets inspired my little poems. Thanks for the fav as well. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/15/2021 11:29:00 PM

That was very romantic. ~~

John Watt

Date: 2/15/2021 9:04:00 PM

Love your parallel images, Alexis. They bring together the best of romance and nature. Enjoyed this very much. Take care my friend ~ John

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/15/2021 8:06:00 PM

How beautiful. I really love this gentle and happy poem. So positive!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/15/2021 7:48:00 PM

So romantic and lovely, Alexis, the way you've matched the beauty in nature to the beauty of loving. I can certainly see this poem as a winner. Good luck! :=) Evelyn

Judy Ball

Date: 2/15/2021 3:28:00 PM

Oohoo! I feel like I just read one of those paper back romances. Nice job. Good luck. I loved it. God Bless, JB

Constance La France

Date: 2/15/2021 12:31:00 PM

Alexis, your poem is lovely, best of luck in Joseph's contest _Constance

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2021 12:06:00 PM

How beautiful, Alexis! Your descriptions are amazing. Excellent entry for the contest. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/16/2021 1:08:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, Thank you so much for such a comment, and well wishes in the contest. I appreciate that you stopped by, have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/15/2021 10:13:00 AM

Tender and delicate like love--enjoyed the sweet tone of your poem my friend. You evoked the images brilliantly, Alexis.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/15/2021 8:29:00 AM

You compare events very well. I feel some gentleness in this poem. ~~