Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

Like a Football In Woman's Game

Just like football 
I am going to be chased in life's game
by a bunch of ladies
as if playing a football match.

I am going to be chased in life's game
they will rush just to touch me
as if playing a football match
receiving me gently in the chest.

They will rush just to touch me
the goalkeeper among them
receiving me gently in the chest
will give me sure kisses.

The goalkeeper among them 
I am going to love her
will sure give me kisses
soft like a feather's touch.

I am going to love her
though I may get occasional kick
soft like a feather's touch
that is part of the game.

Though I may get occasional kick
I must forget the pain
that is part of the game
with so many cute ladies around.

I must forget the pain 
I will be so sought after
with so many cute ladies around
everyone wanting to hug me.

I will be so sought after
by a bunch of ladies
everybody wanting to hug me
just like a football.



© kashinath karmakar (27th June 2011)
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Placement:HM (August 2011)

Contest:Play Ball

Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi

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John Freeman August 4, 2011 at 1:02 PM Kashinath, a worthy presentation...great to see your poem's success, Congratulations on your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2011 at 11:58 AM this is a winner for me, kashi...CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 3, 2011 at 8:11 AM Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's "Play Ball" contest Kashinath. Love,Carol

Joyce Johnson August 2, 2011 at 11:46 PM What a delightful game you anticipate. congratulations on your hm in the contest. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 2, 2011 at 10:27 PM Congrats Kash on your HM in Play Ball luv.. enjoy special honor for great poetry entry..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 21, 2011 at 1:26 AM You sure are a fan of pantuoms eh? And rightly so. I think you are great with them-- this is such a unique take on football, wasn't expecting this--very cool metaphor you got here ;) Never thought of wanting to be a football, pretty witty! :)

Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2011 at 10:35 PM LOVELY it's your day off, Kash. ENJOY

Nick Bagnall June 28, 2011 at 5:21 AM I haven't braved the perils of the pantoum yet, you seen to have handled thsis one nicely - enjoyed the read

Nette Onclaud June 28, 2011 at 1:22 AM kashi, i have 2 new ones for you to read.. come! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 27, 2011 at 8:40 PM a super creation Kashinath..luv the entire concept of u running and all the ladies chasing to catch u luv..an occasional kick too ..how inventive luv..good luck in the contest..oh this is a wow moment piece..

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2011 at 8:24 PM I agree with Robert. this is a witty write. And you are writing every man's fanatasy, I am sure (except for the gays. haha)

James Foulk June 27, 2011 at 10:25 AM loved this write. a very creative and funny piece good luck in the contest. thank you for commenting on Three baby birds.

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2011 at 10:21 AM hmmm, so you're ladies' man.. okay, just for now, hahaha!... really smart and oh so engaging... rated A with winning wishes..:) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels June 27, 2011 at 9:36 AM Kash are you sure this story isn't yours? Lol just kidding ;) I really enjoyed this one.. Reckon it's for the contest? If so, all the best to you ;)

Sara Kendrick June 27, 2011 at 9:34 AM Interesting one..That would have it good points and its bad...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Kash Poet June 27, 2011 at 8:39 AM LOL...not MY story!