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Like a Football In Woman's Game

Just like football I am going to be chased in life's game by a bunch of ladies as if playing a football match. I am going to be chased in life's game they will rush just to touch me as if playing a football match receiving me gently in the chest. They will rush just to touch me the goalkeeper among them receiving me gently in the chest will give me sure kisses. The goalkeeper among them I am going to love her will sure give me kisses soft like a feather's touch. I am going to love her though I may get occasional kick soft like a feather's touch that is part of the game. Though I may get occasional kick I must forget the pain that is part of the game with so many cute ladies around. I must forget the pain I will be so sought after with so many cute ladies around everyone wanting to hug me. I will be so sought after by a bunch of ladies everybody wanting to hug me just like a football. © kashinath karmakar (27th June 2011) =============00============= Placement:HM (August 2011) Contest:Play Ball Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 8/4/2011 1:02:00 PM
Kashinath, a worthy presentation...great to see your poem's success, Congratulations on your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:58:00 AM
this is a winner for me, kashi...CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's "Play Ball" contest Kashinath. Love,Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 11:46:00 PM
What a delightful game you anticipate. congratulations on your hm in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:27:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your HM in Play Ball luv.. enjoy special honor for great poetry entry..
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Date: 7/21/2011 1:26:00 AM
You sure are a fan of pantuoms eh? And rightly so. I think you are great with them-- this is such a unique take on football, wasn't expecting this--very cool metaphor you got here ;) Never thought of wanting to be a football, pretty witty! :)
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:35:00 PM
LOVELY it's your day off, Kash. ENJOY
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:21:00 AM
I haven't braved the perils of the pantoum yet, you seen to have handled thsis one nicely - enjoyed the read
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Date: 6/28/2011 1:22:00 AM
kashi, i have 2 new ones for you to read.. come! :) huggs
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:40:00 PM
a super creation Kashinath..luv the entire concept of u running and all the ladies chasing to catch u luv..an occasional kick too ..how inventive luv..good luck in the contest..oh this is a wow moment piece..
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:24:00 PM
I agree with Robert. this is a witty write. And you are writing every man's fanatasy, I am sure (except for the gays. haha)
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Date: 6/27/2011 10:25:00 AM
loved this write. a very creative and funny piece good luck in the contest. thank you for commenting on Three baby birds.
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Date: 6/27/2011 10:21:00 AM
hmmm, so you're ladies' man.. okay, just for now, hahaha!... really smart and oh so engaging... rated A with winning wishes..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/27/2011 9:36:00 AM
Kash are you sure this story isn't yours? Lol just kidding ;) I really enjoyed this one.. Reckon it's for the contest? If so, all the best to you ;)
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Date: 6/27/2011 9:34:00 AM
Interesting one..That would have it good points and its bad...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:39:00 AM
LOL...not MY story!
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