Lights of the North

On the crispy wind-chilled night in a ship beyond the bay
Looking northward by wind-swept peaks a blue and green foray
We shivered in the northern wind watching toward the sky
When suddenly more light appeared coming from on high
In awe we sat and watched the show, the curtains of unrest
The beauty of the wavy green with red and then some gold
To live and watch the show for real was better than we’re told
In the distant mountains a shelf of snow broke loose to slide
Kicking up a glistening cloud high up into the icy wind to ride
The snowy cloud was filled with green fringed with red and white
From the aurora up above making for a double show tonight
Sun’s energy electrified and coursing through the dark
Left some lasting memories that surely made their mark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:44 PM
John, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 10:50 AM
An awesome journey of rhymes John! Congrats to you!!!! ;-)
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:46 PM
John, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
Richards Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Descriptions are so real, it is like looking at a painting !! Well done, John !
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Very beautiful John , your discriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Laurie Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 12:15 AM
G'day John... Nice picture you've painted of the Northern lights John, something I have only seen photos of but never been lucky enough to see. Regards - Lindsay
Squires Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 4:37 PM
We have never seen them from here either...NE WA. Maybe some day? Hope so. Thanks I appreciate your comment.
Relish Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:26 PM
Just beautiful John... lovely imagery... nads!
Squires Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Thank you so much and much appreciated.
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