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Lightening Bug Or Firefly Or

We’re all out here this evening in a clearing we now stand When comes a little lightening bug and lands atop my hand It’s just as I imagine but what I can not define Is why this tiny insect seems to be without its shine “Please tell me Mr. Firefly, where is your golden light? Sunset is upon us now and soon it will be night" "We’re gathered now to see a show, here on the lawn we wait Your little sparkles on the sky, before it is too late" "Just like a million diamonds in the darkness while you play Floating on the summer breeze through branches as they sway" "Those luminescent patterns that we find within your glow Fluttering about the night I really want to know?” While waiting on its answer just up ahead I spied A bunch of lights now flickering and then the bug replied “All that I can tell you, if a show you came to see You’ll have to watch it as you scream you see, I am a bee” OUCH!

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Date: 10/10/2016 5:10:00 PM
I see you're carrying this whole buzzing thing right through to your response. :)
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Paloma P
Date: 10/10/2016 5:34:00 PM
Keep that honey flowing silly poet. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 5:13:00 PM
Well, what kind of poet would I bee if I didn't? :)
Date: 10/10/2016 4:21:00 PM
Lol.. Very funny .but Ouch....Bees are those kind of insects .nice to see but dont dare touch....: )Lovely.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 5:19:00 PM
That's for sure, I am allergic to them. Thanks so much Charmaine for your visits and smile.
Date: 10/10/2016 4:04:00 PM
I love firefly poetry, you tricked me! Ha funny Chris, love that fifth verse to pieces and of course the painful ending. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Paloma for buzzing around my poem today. Your kind words are always welcome.
Date: 10/10/2016 3:48:00 PM
Hilarious Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I'm happy it made you laugh. :)
Date: 10/10/2016 3:45:00 PM
This is very funny, Chris. A real children's delight. Just excellent poetry! A7
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Daniel.

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