Light To Shadow

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when I block the light I then become a shadow form without substance

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P.M. Richter

Date: 8/2/2025 8:40:00 AM

Love this ~

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/1/2025 7:20:00 PM

I like the depth in these few words, Bill ~

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/31/2025 2:04:00 AM

This is true, the Son is eclipsed. Great little poem.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/31/2025 9:09:00 AM

Thank you, BJ. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/30/2025 4:37:00 PM

I love the metaphorical inference here. Your metaphorical words ring true with me. This is brilliant! hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 7/30/2025 8:33:00 PM

Thanks for the comments on my poetry, Sara. Bill