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Light Over Darkness

Awaken, for the ominous clouds of change lin'gr above the wiskful sea. A storm, brewing within the heart of man, you see. The cries of humanity muffled by the winds of change Loose thy dread for fear cometh only from a source unknown. The heart, source of yur anger Justified by ter'or lurking above seas roar. You are the sacrifice. Bring forth thyne light of understanding, Ne'er ignore what your eyes behold Look into their dreaded eyes. For it is known that thine eyes reveal truth. Darkness shall live only in lights absence. Be the light.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/4/2023 9:23:00 AM

Dear Ray, I enjoyed the intense, dramatic and dynamic imagery and metaphors of your poem; "A storm, brewing within the heart of man, you see" and "The cries of humanity muffled by the winds of change". Indeed, light over darkness prevails but only if we are willing to "Be the light." A grand finale to a powerful poem. Warmest wishes, my expressive friend.. ~Susan

Ray Zottola
Date: 6/1/2023 9:09:00 AM

Susan, im slow on the response as I get lost in other realities surrounding me. Thank you for reading and adding a generous comment. Yours, Z

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/31/2023 9:44:00 AM

A powerful write/ending. Let there be light. Have a blessed day..............

Ray Zottola
Date: 7/23/2023 5:06:00 PM

Paula, So sorry for the late response. Thank you for reading. Have you written any lately? Please let me know. Thanks, Z

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/5/2023 10:59:00 PM

Very Dramaticpanagiota . Lots of emotion here

Ray Zottola
Date: 6/1/2023 9:37:00 AM

You sent this in February. OMG! I need to reply. I am emotional for sure, especially about my childhood. You inspire! Z

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/26/2023 9:28:00 AM

Amen, allow the light within to reveal the darkness within, then allow the spirit to dwell and reject the darkness

Stephan McBride
Date: 1/26/2023 10:55:00 AM

Indeed that's the best way allow the spirit within to teach, mankind has made a mess out of it,

Ray Zottola
Date: 1/26/2023 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Stephan. I write for my own understanding. You know. To be better than I am.