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Light My Fire-Lanterne

Light my fire...

Kiss
my cheek
close my eyes
wet sloppy tongue
ACK!



inspired by the Light my fire 
Lanterne contest by Brian Strand

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/18/2009 4:27:00 PM

Oops, didn't realize you had already won the contest. Congratulations!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/18/2009 4:26:00 PM

Great sense of humor, Trudy! I hope you light a fire in the contest with this great write! Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/18/2009 8:08:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS-Trudy--well deserved--charma

Brandee Augustus

Date: 7/14/2009 1:48:00 PM

Definitely an appropriate ending to your lanterne. It was quite funny. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest.

Judith Angell Meyer

Date: 7/13/2009 8:17:00 PM

Euwwww ... Must have been Rugar! Congratulations on winning a place in Brian's contest Trudy. Now, what is next! ~M~

Date: 7/13/2009 3:05:00 PM

Love the reaction in the last line. I got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/13/2009 3:02:00 PM

~lol~ Congrats Trudy on your win! Awesome!!! Love, Shar