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Robert J. Lindley, 5-29-2018
(Lin Crazy Eights)- ( When Angels Are Sent)
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Light Did Shine From Her Smile, Such Grace She graced all with her gentle ways she so loved to help the poor strays; There resides softness in her voice thinking well of all by first choice, Light did shine from her smile, such grace her good deeds, nothing can erase. Was through winter snow that she came brought comfort with her just her name; Now this abyss shows she is gone her admirers feel so alone, Light did shine from her smile, such grace her good deeds, nothing can erase. Set all with wonderment and awe her absence seems our greatest fall; For now dawn comes in cold and dim sorrows as in lost lover's film, Light did shine from her smile, such grace her good deeds, nothing can erase. Spring's blessings saw her fly away its joys turned to deepest of grays; From whence she came nobody knew her leaving sent waves of deep blue, Light did shine from her smile, such grace her good deeds, nothing can erase. O' yes we kneel, pray her return rekindling love's fires that burn; Tho' Time answers not our sad plea nor explains the why she did flee, Light did shine from her smile, such grace her good deeds, nothing can erase. We beg our angel come again we are lost in a swirling spin; We wonder why we were blessed none of our sins had we confessed, Light did shine from her smile, such grace her good deeds, nothing can erase. Now many decades have thus flown our love for her has only grown; Some few say they have seen her light as it brightened their darkest night, Light did shine from her smile, such grace her good deeds, nothing can erase. She graced all with her gentle ways she so loved to help the poor strays; There resides softness in her voice thinking well of all by first choice, Light did shine from her smile, such grace her good deeds, nothing can erase. Robert J. Lindley, 5-29-2018 (Lin Crazy Eights)- ( When Angels Are Sent)

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Date: 6/2/2018 3:44:00 PM
Really well done with such restrictions Robert, I'm in awe of your talents my friend...
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Date: 5/29/2018 9:27:00 PM
Oh Robert, such a beautifully composed poem with such 'angelic' and graceful rhythm and rhyme. She sounds like an exquisite guardian angel to me - how precious to have one looking out for you; 'Some few say they have seen her light as it brightened their darkest night'.. Superb and inspiring poetry my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/30/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thank you my good friend. Always a true pleasure to read you comments as it is to read your superb poetry! Yes, even humans can be angels for brief periods of time... Those that embrace God and bask in God's LIGHT.
Date: 5/29/2018 3:29:00 PM
Sounds like a very special angel Robert :) Well written!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/30/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thank you my friend, for reading and commenting.. You saw that much of it did reference a real person from "ancient" times. A combination of reality, inspiration, imagination and a spiritual reality too.
Date: 5/29/2018 3:25:00 PM
Good deeds can never be erased, neither can a beautiful smile, I lovely poem to read this afternoon, Thanks Robert
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/30/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thank you my friend. True, good is eternal, evil is not. Mankind is limited by time, god is not.
Date: 5/29/2018 2:57:00 PM
Such a loving and lovely poem, Robert. Makes one wonder who "she" is. GL in the contest.
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Date: 5/29/2018 11:33:00 AM
wow Robert, you did really well to get so many lines at 8 syllables.. The poem flows so well... This is a beautiful poem, sounds like a real angel to me..
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/29/2018 12:32:00 PM
I then took that as a sign from my muse and went with it.. She being a very vindictive and a dark beast when I refuse to do as she commands. lol
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/29/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Nice to see somebody appreciates creativity , smooth flow, clear and true message when delivered. I started this one as first half of a collaboration offer but went on to finish it as the verses just kept on coming to me..

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