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Violette
Invented by Viola Gardener. It is stanzaic, rhymed, unlimited quatrains,
in the aaaB cccB and so on, feminine rhyming scheme (a rhyme that matches two or more syllables, usually at the end of respective lines, in which the final syllable or syllabication are unstressed. B is a linking rhyme from stanza to stanza.  Syllables, 6,6,6,4, per line. 

Dawn heralds the sunrise and it’s not a surprise that despite night's demise Sol births daylight. Dusk merges with shadows that surround and enclose silhouettes in repose claimed by twilight. Luna slowly ascends as Her beauty transcends night and darkness descends bathed in moonlight. Now no longer concealed shining stars get revealed as darkness is repealed by faint starlight. (Violette) 04/03/2020

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Date: 4/24/2020 2:00:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Emile:-) Very interesting form! Heartiest congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward, stay safe my friend, Emile.

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