Lifting the Fog

Like milk from blue mountains' swollen breasts, the fog
Intertwines with pungent campfire smoke, a blue mist
Frescoing my quiet river valley's primeval lap.
Twilight tiptoes, surreptitiously, spying on secluded tryst;
Interlaced, grape and honeysuckle canopy overhead,
Noddng blossoms dripping sweet fragrance,
Granting nectared kisses my lips cannot resist.

The blue moon peers through hazy clouds, then turns
Hiding his eyes from lovers unashamed upon the ground;
Emotion rising in his core, he looks again and sadly yearns.

Furtively, he draws foggy blankets o'er us two,
Orchestrating sequestered solitude until
Golden sunlight warms the earth uncov'ring me and you.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, July 5, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Glad I found this one! Very inspiring in its classic way my friend... I see that it won first place . Big congrats on that too!!! I see that I miss out when not entering too many contests.
A   Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 6:34 PM
Faye, I'm enjoying the warm scenery.. Congratulations, on your wonderful win. Always~ LINDA
Duncan Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Love it :)
Mcintosh Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 1:59 PM
I love your poem
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 5:47 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Deschler Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 10:31 PM
The pictures that your words have just painted in my mind are truly breathtaking! I can clearly see why this poem was a first place winner! Congratulations to you, Faye! Very well deserved!
Rivenbark Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Such amazing imagery here, absolutely stunning. Congratulations on your win :D
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 8:51 AM
my friend Faye. :) the first time I read this I am captured by your first 3lines.. :) i love the imagery as the feeling it arouses in me.. :) the nodding blossoms are so cute!! :D! no wonder this earned a first place!!! BIG BIG CONGRATULATIONS! hugs.. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,olive eloisa, God bless you.. :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 8:53 AM
and i'll fave this.. :D!
Hoffman Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 8:34 PM
Congrats on your win Faye,you painted a beauty with this entry
Nance Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 8:03 PM
Wow! what a scene! impressively worded and wonderful, grats on your win:)
Mohn Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Faye...congratulations on this beauty...I thought it would a be lofty placement...thanks also for the sweet comments on mine as well
Walker  Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Congratulations on the win Faye... Hugs Verlena
A   Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:26 PM
congratulations...PD
Lamoureux Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations.
Gorelick Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 6:56 AM
What could be more lovely than this poem and a big win. congrats. BG
Hamilton Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 6:56 AM
super Faye lovely imagery congrats on win hugs
Callus Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 6:25 AM
A top7rating for this captivating poem, Faye! Only the bold lettering reminded me that it's an acrostic, otherwise it's all smooth flowing. Excellent imagery, too. Congratulations on a top-podium win! // paul
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Congrats on a great win with such beautiful imagery sweet Faye.. The first line is masterful!.. Hugs.. Arlene
A. Sharma Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 12:31 AM
Awesome acrostic Faye! Congrats on first place win!
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 11:22 PM
My goodness, this is by far, the most gorgeous of all the poems I read. Congrats to you on your well deserved acrostic poem win in my contest. Also, the grammar is impeccable.
El Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 5:35 PM
This poem was incredible, love the insight and metaphor. Thanks for inviting me to read your work.
Gibson Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 6:46 PM
Thank you, Kwame. So glad you paid me a visit.
Mohn Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Absolutely wonderful Faye..you are going to place well with this
Gibson Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, David. Glad you stopped by.
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