Lifting Me

~ Thunder breaks my lonely morning Worries rain of clouded tears Heartache calls in scattered silence Weary dreams see blurry fears Then my eyes of lighted vision Find your smile in written phrase As the sun returns to rising Lifting me to brighter days ~

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/18/2019 5:10:00 PM

A perfect touch with this one. Bravo. Cheers, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 5:18:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2019 3:44:00 PM

This is sweet.

Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 4:32:00 PM

So are you. : )

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/18/2019 3:05:00 PM

sounds like you are writing about the reader's when they find your smile and their own smile through your gifted pen...i know your poems always bring smiles when i read them, they are always penned so beautifully...love this one, although i seem to love all of your writes, as they add beauty to each day... :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 3:13:00 PM

Thank you Sandy. Your as always so kind to me. Your comments are definitely something I enjoy finding anytime of the day. Thank you again and again.

Hello There

Date: 9/18/2019 12:20:00 PM

A better day for everyone when we get to read something from you :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 12:36:00 PM

Wow, what a nice thing to say. Thank you so much my friend. That really made my day.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/18/2019 12:02:00 PM

The smile of being loved is like sun rising, bringing peace, love and joy .. High mood. salute Chris alkas

Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 12:35:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your visit today.

John Lawless

Date: 9/18/2019 8:11:00 AM

AWWWWW....This poem is a little umbrella inviting us to play in the rain, jump in the puddles, and write a poem....Nice AM greeting Chris

Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 8:45:00 AM

Thanks John. Morning thunderstorm here today which any rain at all is highly unusual so I thought I'd take advantage of the wet weather inspiration outside of my window. I am happy you liked it.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/18/2019 7:54:00 AM

Simply beautiful Chris! Takes me through so many emotions! But the best one is the smile you always bring to my face when I wake each day! ;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 8:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Brenda. If this made you smile then it was worth writing.