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The classic Than-Bauk rhymes 4th, 3rd, 2nd syllables on consecutive lines. I have chosen the same sound instead. Each line has 4 syllables.

at the wind’s lilt wafting lift of sweet lullaby

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/29/2024 9:28:00 AM

Dear Kim, Reading this wonderful, well inked Than-Bauk gave me a real sense of peace, comfort, serenity, and more appreciation for the tenderness of life. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2024 4:04:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel! I’m glad the poem put you in a serene mood :) Bless you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2024 4:57:00 AM

I like this one. Way to go. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2024 5:09:00 AM

Thank you!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/28/2024 5:53:00 PM

Ethereal indeed. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2024 4:14:00 AM

Thank you, Joe! Hugs

Regina Elliott

Date: 8/28/2024 4:21:00 PM

Dreamy and beauteous, Kim. A star filled late August night to you. :))))

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2024 4:10:00 AM

Aww…what a sweet thing to say! Hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2024 3:50:00 PM

So pretty

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2024 4:09:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/28/2024 3:48:00 PM

Oh, I love this. Well written. A Fave for me :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2024 4:09:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi! That makes me smile, my friend!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/28/2024 11:02:00 AM

This is a beautiful concept. Wind is a living gift.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2024 11:53:00 AM

Thank you, Hilda!

Silent One

Date: 8/28/2024 10:51:00 AM

This is lovely..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2024 11:54:00 AM

Thank you, Silent! :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/28/2024 1:52:00 AM

Superb word arrangement not losing the essence, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2024 5:34:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal! I appreciate!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/27/2024 2:30:00 PM

Your new way of writing this form fits so well in this poem,,,,I would love to write something like this, but it's your authentic way, not mine, lol...you're a special poet to have on this site, Kim... so much to learn and enjoy with your poetry...xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 3:26:00 PM

Thank you most kindly, Paige! Lots of love your way xoxo

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/27/2024 12:58:00 PM

A tricky Than-Bauk Kim, you certainly nailed it for imagery, but boy the rhyming syllables are possibly out of my pronunciation range, but that would be nothing new for me lol! Cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/27/2024 1:54:00 PM

Trust me not to read your notes, is this a new form you’re developing, will have to come up with a good name, Than-Kim-Bauk, has a nice ring to it! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 1:40:00 PM

Possibly you didn’t read my notes. This is a non-rhyming but has similar sounds on the lines in place of the rhymes. :) Thanks!

Hugo Sarvida Jr.

Date: 8/27/2024 11:25:00 AM

Nice, Kim. I like it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 1:40:00 PM

Thanks, Hugo! :)