Life's Valued Treasures

Life's valued treasures, I hold most dear, the ones that dwell deep within my heart. There's a special memory from younger days that I will share with you, and fondly impart. When I think as far back as I can, I remember, there was only one special thing I ever wanted ~ A big white horse, with flowing mane and tail. I rode him every night; in dreams, he haunted. Christmas wishes never came true for me because you see, my family was rather poor, but on a December morning, when I was ten there was a loud knock upon our door. Dad looked at me and said, "I think it's for you." He took my hand and gently guided me outside. Before I saw the surprise, I heard a gentle neigh, and stood in disbelief, my eyes opened wide. I remember that I cried, but I couldn't speak. When Dad lifted me to the leather saddle I whispered "Thank you," and kissed his cheek. I was sitting on my dream horse, legs astraddle. No fancy dolls or dress up things appealed to me. I had what my heart desired and named him Knight. I told him all my secrets as we rode hills and fields, mane and tail flowing, coat shining in the sunlight. August 5th, 2020 Sponsor: Constance La France Dusty Old Memories Poetry Contest
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Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:18 PM
A lovely poem Jenna I see congrats are in order, a contest win and POTD, don't know how I missed this one!
Logan Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Thank you very much for reading it now and leaving your kind comments, John.
Wanter Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 7:59 AM
I just can't imagine! A daddy so sweet! Mine would have done that had he had the means. This should have been POTD absolutely!
Logan Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Thank you for such sweet sentiments, Sun. The many kind comments were reward enough. My Dad was wonderful.
Koplin Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 3:39 PM
What an amazing memory. I can picture the big old smile on your face and feel the love of your new found friend knight. Congratulations on your win!
Logan Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 1:16 PM
It was a big surprise and the most special gift ever as a child. Thank you, Mark.
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 8:02 PM
You know, I hadn't realized that you earned two POTD's in a row! Wow! I am sure that's never happened in my 2.5 years on Poetry Soup! Congrats to you! Joy and Light, Gershon
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 7:12 AM
I think it may have been a glitch and felt a bit guilty about it. Thank you for liking my poetry, Gershon.
One Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on POTD... Your sentiments are true, but sometimes it can be difficult to comment on a lot of poems.. As people are busy and there are so many poets and poems on here... If only there was more time in the world.. also, some read and appreciate, but maybe a bit shy to comment, or some are just not good at commenting... Enjoy your POTD.
Logan Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 5:45 AM
It's ok. It's been happening to me, too.
One Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 4:57 AM
Sorry, Jenna, I dont know how this appeared on your poem??? It was for Pangie.... Congrats to you also.
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Congrats to you Jenna, on your poem been the POTD.
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:54 PM
Thank you, Okonkwo.
La France Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my memories challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:54 PM
Thank you for congrats on both, Constance. I appreciate your thoughts.
Kitchin Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Jenna, congratulations on POTD with your heartwarming poem!
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Thank you, Tania.
Kauffman Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 12:17 PM
Very special story, Jenna, told wonderfully - heartwarming. Congratulations on your POTD
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Thank you so much, Sam.
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 10:57 AM
This is really extra-wonderful, Jenna. And I thought these things only happened in storybooks... fictional accounts... I feel that this is of a quality reminiscent of "Miracle on 34th Street," if I remember the title right. So heartwarming!! Congrats on a richly-deserved POTD! ~ Gershon
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 11:52 AM
Thank you ever so kindly for your wonderful comments. Yes, Virginia, it is a storybook-like tale.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 9:17 AM
Congratulations on a POTD win. WOW!!! A wonderful story/poem. Dreams that come true are the very best. Enjoy your win and day.........................
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 10:31 AM
Thanks, Paula. Enjoy your entire weekend.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 8:34 AM
wtg jenna another POTD success - you must tell me your secret lol:-) hugs Janxx
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 10:31 AM
When or if I ever discover that, I'll be sure to pass it on to you. Thanks, Jan.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Love this Jenna! When I was a kid, my imaginary friend was a big black steed, that occasionally had wings ;), Congratulations on a POTD! xomo
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 10:30 AM
Ahhh, a black beauty with Pegasus wings. Oh, he sounds wonderful! Thanks, mo.
Wanter Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 7:46 AM
The gift was your Dad's love! Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 10:29 AM
It was his gift of love. Thank you for you beautiful thought, Sun.
Gondolf Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 7:43 AM
Wow, Jenna, two in a row. Congrats! and you pen just keeps spewing these wonderful thoughts. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Good morning, John. Thank you.
Mcgee Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 7:13 AM
Wow! congrats on this one too. Quite lovely.
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 7:44 AM
Thank you for visiting this one, too, Jeanne.
Toney Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Your poems are delightful, Jenna. This one’s a Fav for me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day, two days in a row! Brilliant!
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 7:43 AM
Hi Mark, and thank you so much. I'm not sure how that happened.
Michael Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Your star shines...Congratulations Jenna on POTD...pull back the curtains and let the moon light in...
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 7:42 AM
Thank you very much, Arturo.
Koplin Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Wow that’s awesome two days in a row!! Must be a new record. Congratulations on potd great poem!
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:10 AM
I've no clue, but I can feel the frowns because of it. Thank you, Mark. Tom's gremlin may have returned to stir up trouble.
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 1:35 AM
- Such memories are priceless, Jenna ... love it :) - Congratulations on your contest win .... and p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 3:51 AM
Yes, they are. Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Cunningham Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 1:02 AM
Wow, never seen that before, two days in a row, congratulations again on POTD Jenna. Tom
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:25 AM
lol Tom. I think I'll be sharing that feeling with you.
Cunningham Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:14 AM
I remember the crash before this last one, I got POTD and it was showing for about a week, even I got fed up of seeing it lol.
Cunningham Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Oh no, call the hotline lol.
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 3:51 AM
I think it may be a mistake. Maybe there's another gremlin causing a new glitch. Thank you, Tom.
Watt Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 11:14 PM
Back so soon? This contest was judged 11 minutes after I left my previous comment! Congratulations on your win!
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 3:48 AM
Thanks, John. I'm glad you're still visiting :)
Watt Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 10:43 AM
A charming story of a childhood dream come true, so poetically rendered. Makes me grateful for parents that provided a happy childhood full of good memories. Very lovely, Jenna, I enjoyed this very much ~ John
Logan Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 3:47 AM
Thank you, John. I'm glad your childhood was a happy time.
Proxenos Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 10:15 AM
He sounds like a wonderful dad, alot like mine, but we lost him when he was just over 60. He broke my heart! A superb write my friend, keep your ink well full! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Logan Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 11:40 AM
I'm so sorry you lost your dad too soon. I've lost my own, so I know the pain of that kind of heart break. Thank you for leaving me your comments, Jennifer.
Hill Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 8:10 AM
What a wonderful gift! Great name for him as well...TAH
Logan Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Thank you, Tobey.
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