Life's Tempest

Ashen grays abound Life's shores await their tempest Time begins to shift .

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/27/2015 5:09:00 AM

I read this with both political and ecological implications. You have the haiku form down to a fine art. I am in awe. A Fav!

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 3:37:00 PM

Hey Maurice, it's about nature's wrath, when such a Tempest is brewed, nature moves what was set in time, now shifts, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/26/2015 3:42:00 AM

Dino JAmes, it is indeed when storms and darkness threatens our human nature, or even all that around us everything may somehow change, challenged, and will be pushed to adapt, to survive or the negative to fail... :) nice one! warm hugs..olive eloisaxxx

James Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 3:41:00 PM

What time has laid, is easily displaced, defaced in grace through sheer wrath, hugs//James xxx always xxx

James Peranteau

Date: 3/23/2015 10:54:00 AM

Exciting drama unleashed by the bard ! Love the fury enveloping this write sir....your Haikus are simply beckoning my brains thirst for the terse write James...TY....much love, james

James Peranteau
Date: 3/23/2015 2:27:00 PM

Back at ya James....YOU DO write fantastic Haiku ! Many blessings to you and yours fine friend.....much love james

James Fraser
Date: 3/23/2015 1:53:00 PM

Hiya James, glad you liked this little piece. I wrote few Haiku the other evening all with different theme. A little word rush to be honest. Many smiles for you my lovely friend, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2015 1:27:00 PM

a deep stormy write James - so few words say so much:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/22/2015 7:45:00 AM

A short poem written as quick as the thought, hugs//James xx