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Life's Sneaky Mirror

I looked in the mirror and shook at the knees T’was enough to give a gal, the Hebe jibes Where was that young girl men looked at with glee Who was that old ding bat, No that couldn’t be me Wrinkled old prune with aching vertebrae Mutton dressed as lamb in a silly red beret You’ve got to be dreaming, it’s a temporary disguise Wake up girlie, time passes, the mirror never lies I’d like to be the girl who still should be there But with her, past memories, I just cannot share Inside I’m still that youngster filled with jeux de vie No use complaining of things that used to be So get on with it gal with no tantrums or sighs Dress to the nines and remember to exercise Don’t worry if gorgeous hunks no longer at your stare Find lots of new beginnings and great moments to share That mirrors very sneaky folks and it will come visit you So embrace life who cares about a wrinkle or two!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/23/2011 3:49:00 AM
The mirror does too lie! You are a star baby...your heart is made of gold...your wrinkles don't mean you're old...I think that lady in the red beret is one swell-looking chick!!! Lizzie, this is a great entry and who knows....I think it just might hit the top!! Your experience as a writer shines thru!! Gwendolen-Your sunny girl!!
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Date: 11/22/2011 9:48:00 AM
Whimsical in the most joyous of ways... Very sage. Excellent poem!
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Date: 11/21/2011 7:50:00 PM
HI Lizzy, although I'm there I'm too silly to know it so I march on wishing others saw it my way! You did a great job expressing what a lot of us feel. Love your visits my dear, very encouraging! Hugs
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Date: 11/20/2011 8:05:00 PM
Indeed, let's always, under any circumstances and whatever time in our life, embrace life. There is always something to be grateful for. True Love is not limited by looks anyway. Older is also wiser, and there is much to learn from the Golden Age. It ins't called Golden age for nothing. :) Take care and thanks for sharing. Well done. Also thank you for your comment on my poem, "The woman who knew". Caroline.
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Date: 11/20/2011 3:26:00 PM
Last night my wife and I were saying that we couldn't believe how old we had gotten and how quickly it came. I take great pride in her laugh line, I gave them to her. Tony
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Date: 11/20/2011 8:22:00 AM
You get full kudos just for using the term "ding bat" in a poem. :) Awesome approach here. Great job!
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Date: 11/20/2011 7:49:00 AM
Smile * Ãgain, I find perspectives and points of view within place in regards unto ones reflective verse, my dear * Personally, I find myself Forever young. Wonderful poem * My love always, John *
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