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Lifes Mysteries

L Libations proof - a lifting of spirits. I Ills for a time can be distilled on shelf. F Fresh scent of pine in Winter blues, a wit. E Elevation of mood, aware of self. S Star in the sky, infused in baby’s gaze. M Myriad maker of all the sky lights. Y Years of earth’s life are dim; Ancient of Days. S Surreal, the arms of love who’d win the fight. T Talk, talk, talk — with smooth lips, the mind’s on fire. E Effervescent, maddening - red as rose. R Realization you're in love — deep desire. I In awesomeness of emotional throes. E Eccentricity freshens a fruit bowl. S Smile on sweet face disturbs the woeful soul. 12/8/2020 John Hamilton’s LIFES MYSTERIES Hybrid Sonnet in acrostic form

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Date: 1/2/2021 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2021 6:42:00 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Date: 12/31/2020 10:45:00 AM
Another excellent write, congrats Kim on placing!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2020 1:41:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 12/13/2020 4:57:00 PM
So gorgeously penned, my wise and wonderful friend; this one is a winner in every contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2020 2:27:00 AM
Thank you, sweet one!
Date: 12/8/2020 11:41:00 AM
A wise acrostic, one that you have written so well.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2020 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 12/8/2020 9:17:00 AM
Not easy to write an acrostic in sonnet form. You did extremely well. Thanks for reading my poem. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2020 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! Was not easy to write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2020 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! Was not easy to write.
Date: 12/8/2020 8:09:00 AM
This is a beautiful acrostic.. on Life's mysteries... Kim. I loved the line 'star in the sky infused in baby's gaze'... Hugs ~ Ani
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2020 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Ani! I’m glad you liked that line.
Date: 12/8/2020 7:20:00 AM
- A big smile ... for you, Kim .... and the world - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2020 6:59:00 PM
Big smile back at ya! Thank you!
Date: 12/8/2020 6:42:00 AM
Lovely writing.., God bless you always
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2020 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Regina! Bless you too.

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