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Life's My Oyster

Aware that the Goldilocks Zone is an area of habitable space a planet is from a star, this Monotetra poem resulted from my first thought...thinking with the mind of this fairytale miss. I don't like to whine or complain but sometimes I am quite inane. When feeling lost, I can't remain Totally sane totally sane The day's too hot; the night's too cold I try real hard to stay controlled but life seized me when I got old a stranglehold a stranglehold Husband said I've become a grouch He's a caveman. To that I'll vouch because he broke both bed and couch Walks with a slouch walks with a slouch I cooked a roast; he wanted steak His loud snoring keeps me awake That ol' bear gives me a headache I need a break I need a break One day soon, I'll leave that lout Wear a smile instead of a pout Sleep in my bed and throw him out Without a doubt without a doubt I will not be his 'Goldi Girl' That Neanderthal is a churl Life's my oyster with sand to swirl I'll be a pearl I'll be a pearl March 28, 2021 Goldilocks Zone Poetry Contest Sponsored by Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 4/17/2021 4:50:00 PM
excellent story Jenna, love the impact of the repeated phrases I have never tried this form before it looks challenging with rhyme too, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/5/2021 11:38:00 AM
Brilliant poetry Jenna - all the best for a win! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/6/2021 4:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer.
Date: 4/4/2021 8:09:00 AM
This poem is a pearl my friend, I like the repeated phrase in the last line of each stanza, I must try that some time. Happy Easter, Jenna. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/6/2021 4:23:00 AM
Thank you, John. I hope your Easter weekend was a great one.
Date: 3/28/2021 12:28:00 PM
A fine write Jenna, nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Hope all is well, take care and blessings always,Gordon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/31/2021 4:14:00 AM
All is well with me, Gordon. I've just been a little busy and a lot turned off to ps lately. Thanks for the read and comments.
Date: 3/28/2021 9:06:00 AM
Another gem from your pen or should I say pearl. Well written Jenna and best of luck. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/31/2021 4:13:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom.
Date: 3/28/2021 7:28:00 AM
"Life's my oyster with sand to swirl I'll be a pearl I'll be a pearl" Awesome Job Jenna! I love the happy ending. Great positivity
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/31/2021 4:13:00 AM
Everyone needs a little spit shine once in a while. lol Thanks, mark.

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