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"life's Lesson Learned"

I would not have stifled my own style, For child of the wild attention, With the contentions so much, With pose church inventions... Attention’s pose. Roses fading, Swaying love, Precept’s, Mold. I would have studied more my precept, How to know my love twice as much, Not mind illusion’s concepts! I would now be using, From heaven's treasures, Naught of the mind! Of love would... Be my, Cup. My earthly time would not have been spent, On repent for the foolishness, For I would have talked the talk, The walk I would have done, Pathway to success, Blessed precept, Kept in love, Sacred, Glove. For Contest: Journey back in Time In Honor of: Linda-Marie

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Date: 10/7/2010 9:03:00 PM
A great message in your poem, and congratulations on your win, john. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/6/2010 11:45:00 AM
congrats on your win with this wonderful poem
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:07:00 PM
Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, John
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Linda-Marie's contest " A Journey Back In Time". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congrats Moses on your success in my Nonet contest with this vibrant entry.. as always appreciate your constant support with luv..
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:08:00 PM
awesome poem for the contest.(: if you wanted to walk the walk & talk the talk like you do now in your words! who knows what more you would be today, Moses. I hope you are well. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 9/24/2010 8:34:00 AM
A wonderful write. If we could go back in time I think we change things and be a little wiser with our time. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/23/2010 3:18:00 AM
Best of luck in the contest , Moses with this well presented piece . If we all could turn back the clock ????
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:55:00 PM
amazing John, love this. Harry
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Date: 9/22/2010 6:44:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poetry, I love this Nonet form, your poem is magnificent, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:11:00 PM
If we could go back and know what we know now, life could have been different but we are not given that opportunity...Sad to say also we can't open someone else's brain and pour the info in either...Good luck in the contest with this deserving work..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:14:00 PM
Pick whatever Moon verse you like John no problem, hard form above I haven't tryed yet!!! Light & Love & please give me a blog comment?
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:47:00 AM
Very creative and interesting entry to the contest, John. Good luck
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Date: 9/21/2010 9:17:00 PM
thankxxx for supporting my contest Moses.. will not read fully tonight but more concentration as the contest draws to a close my friend..good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/21/2010 7:36:00 PM
There are things I would change too, John. Like you, I have a different perspective on life now than I did years ago. Good luck in the contest. Diane
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Date: 9/21/2010 7:18:00 PM
Oh yes, John, if I were to go back in time, this is what I would try to correct as well. A very strong statement made in your wise nonet! Wishing you success in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/21/2010 6:34:00 PM
its lovely John, if for the contest you should check directions once more, Linda Marie asked for 3 stanzas of nonet, good luck
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