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Life's Footballs

A bit flaky and distracted due to some muddle I missed that all important first huddle When the gameplan is borne of commotion It’s hard to be regarded as the man in motion In the big game of life running day and night Often the goal posts are clear out in sight Yet opportunities fly by like footballs meant to be caught Hard to differentiate the ones meant for me and those not I’d love to be the gunner and run an oblique as fast as I can Carrying the ball past the ten-yard line like a crazy madman Avoiding the pancake block at all costs, this is no time for the shackles It’s a wildcat offense so avoid quarterbacks and all defensive tackles Always being in the zone is exhausting, heads up on high alert Lest you miss that perfect pass, it used to be much easier in a mini skirt The game clock is ticking, I have to do what’s necessary Finish the game with what else but a Hail Mary Submitted on January 25, 2019 for contest LATE JAN 2019 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on February 24, 2018

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Date: 3/8/2018 1:25:00 PM
The juxposition of this poem amazed me. Well-thought out, and executed beautifully.
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Date: 3/8/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Very appreciated.
Date: 3/7/2018 9:12:00 PM
Nicely done! GL on contest!
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Date: 3/7/2018 9:54:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/7/2018 6:07:00 PM
Great poem, Line! I love the way you compare opportunities to footballs, awesome job portraying the action in this writing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!-Paulina
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Date: 3/7/2018 7:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paulina. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/7/2018 6:03:00 PM
Hi Line , great flow and very clever write my friend , good look in the contest ::))) hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2018 7:28:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Niall. Much appreciated.

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