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Life's Footballs

A bit flaky and distracted due to some muddle
I missed that all important first huddle

When the gameplan is borne of commotion
It’s hard to be regarded as the man in motion

In the big game of life running day and night
Often the goal posts are clear out in sight

Yet opportunities fly by like footballs meant to be caught
Hard to differentiate the ones meant for me and those not

I’d love to be the gunner and run an oblique as fast as I can
Carrying the ball past the ten-yard line like a crazy madman

Avoiding the pancake block at all costs, this is no time for the shackles
It’s a wildcat offense so avoid quarterbacks and all defensive tackles

Always being in the zone is exhausting, heads up on high alert
Lest you miss that perfect pass, it used to be much easier in a mini skirt

The game clock is ticking, I have to do what’s necessary
Finish the game with what else but a Hail Mary



AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 1:25 PM
The juxposition of this poem amazed me. Well-thought out, and executed beautifully.
Gauthier Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Very appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Nicely done! GL on contest!
Gauthier Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Wodarz Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Great poem, Line! I love the way you compare opportunities to footballs, awesome job portraying the action in this writing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!-Paulina
Gauthier Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you so much, Paulina. Much appreciated visit and comment.
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