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Life's a Beauteous Dream

I dreamt a dream that renewed kindred memories Rekindling past passions of moonlit love-themes, Enamoring love-embers blooming heartfelt longings, Crooning hints-romantic~ life’s a beauteous dream; When merrily you enthralled me in springs of yore Fetching yesteryears’ treasured keepsakes to fore Lauding pages of albums seasons bygone adored Reviving ardent allure, questing for love evermore. I recognized fervid smiles of twinkles in your eyes Tethered bashfully to arc of love on fulgent skies, As together we watched winsome emotions climb Inscribing on celestial canvas, halo of love sublime; Just as Venus smiled and Moon winked impishly When brilliant stars avowed~ forever we shall be, And song of lark strummed of a mirthful morning, Rising in paradise you envisioned for you and me. Embraced in delight through night’s blissful fantasy Inflaming love’s yearnings stoking endearing instincts, Ascribing form and meaning to abandoned reveries, Greeting me, you agreed~ life’s a beauteous dream. October 6, 2022 Placed 1st: The Mystical Dream Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 10/30/2022 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win Vijay :)
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Date: 10/22/2022 11:55:00 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your contest top winning amply deserved placement, Dear Vijay. Blessings my friend
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Date: 10/19/2022 12:55:00 PM
a beauteous poem for a beauteous dream, Vijay. Very nice!
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Date: 10/18/2022 12:55:00 PM
Wow, incredibly romantic, beautiful and steeped in love. Precious memories. This is a wonderful write sweet Vijay <3
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Date: 10/11/2022 7:30:00 AM
Ahhh!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Very passionate work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2022 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Sara--much appreciate.
Date: 10/11/2022 4:33:00 AM
What a great entry for the contest Vijay!! So very full of dreamlike imagery! Your style shines through this gem!! happy Tuesday!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2022 6:09:00 AM
Glad you stopped by Mike. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 10/10/2022 5:15:00 PM
Embraced in delight through night’s blissful fantasy , beautiful.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2022 6:09:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Eve. Many thanks.
Date: 10/10/2022 7:31:00 AM
So sweetly romantic and beautifully penned Vijay. I love the repetition of your "...beauteous dream." Linda
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Date: 10/13/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Linda--much appreciate.
Date: 10/9/2022 12:28:00 PM
"Embraced in delight through night’s blissful fantasy Inflaming love’s yearnings stoking endearing instincts, Ascribing form and meaning to abandoned reveries, Greeting me, you agreed~ life’s a beauteous dream." A treasure! Watch this about romantic dreams, you will love: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26tIOTH2u4g
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2022 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Joe--glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit as always. Yes indeed--I liked the presentation you referred me to.
Date: 10/9/2022 8:34:00 AM
A beautiful dream with enchanted scenes, Wonderful write Vijay
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Date: 10/9/2022 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 10/9/2022 6:04:00 AM
WoW! Vijay, This is an good entry for the contest. Good content and imagery. You are an exceptional writer. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2022 1:46:00 PM
Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate--many thanks, Alexis.
Date: 10/8/2022 9:36:00 PM
Excellennt poetry, Vijay. I thought your imagery and descriptions were dreamy and poetic. Your entry should do well, my friend. Thanks for sharing the poetry of your love. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2022 1:45:00 PM
Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks, Bill.
Date: 10/8/2022 6:12:00 AM
Vijay, this is such a beautiful, romantic, vividly descriptive piece! I wish I could have dreams like this. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2022 7:20:00 AM
So very kind of you to say so, Janice. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 10/8/2022 2:25:00 AM
Love your dream Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2022 7:19:00 AM
Goad you liked the poem, Harry. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 10/7/2022 6:37:00 PM
"Rekindling kindred memories, moonlit love-themes." Anything is *possible* in a dream. This is beautiful in every way, Vijay. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2022 7:19:00 AM
You are right my friend--anything is possible in a dream. Much appreciate your kind feedback, as always, Brandy. Many thanks for your wonderful presence on my page.
Date: 10/7/2022 12:44:00 PM
Life can certainly be a beautiful dream, especially if presented in the way this poem does, Vijay. For a moment I was given a rare look into the garden of Eden! ~ Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 2:21:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem, Paul. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks. Regards.
Date: 10/7/2022 7:17:00 AM
A symphony of divine verses that delight the heart, and the mind of the reader, my dearest friend, Vijay! A FAVE for me. Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 7:51:00 AM
So nice to hear that--especially from a learned friend like you, Demetrios. Many thanks for your kind remarks and a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 10/7/2022 5:53:00 AM
A poem of intense longing full of passion to travel back to the days of romantic love. When sweet memories come as dreams, we wish the dream should never end. But sad we cannot dream for ever. As ever, so beautifully written with romantic ardour. All the Best Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 7:50:00 AM
Much kindness in your thoughts, Valsa. I always appreciate your insightful remarks and analysis. Many thanks.
Date: 10/7/2022 4:42:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. It is good to dream good dreams each night and also some daydreams as well. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Sara for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit as always.
Date: 10/6/2022 11:10:00 PM
Wish I had such romantic dreams. Usually I get nightmares. Wonderful thoughts, metaphors and imagery.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 7:48:00 AM
Many thanks for your support, Victor. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 10/6/2022 5:37:00 PM
I love your loving Metaphors that transcend you into reality, you reel the reader in with an adoration for a beloved and carry us through in romantic feelings for her and at the end were reminded it was a dream. Love how you made us forget of the dream state and made us awake in the moment to feel each word and then at the end to bring us back to a dream. Clever play on words but more importantly Vijay was the love in your metaphors that were unique and beautiful and it is always a trademark...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 7:47:00 AM
Your kindness shows everywhere on Soup--for you spread goodwill on every page you visit. I always appreciate reading your detailed insights, Michael. Many thanks for your glowing remarks my friend.
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michael tor
Date: 10/6/2022 5:40:00 PM
of yours to reach for the magic in words less travelled through the narrow gate of great Poetry. Impressive as always my friend, another exceptional entry by you. God bless you Vijay for your marvelous Creativity and choosing of words...
Date: 10/6/2022 4:32:00 PM
My dear friend, Vijay, your exquisite metaphors are of the highest caliber, and the lexicon you choose to portray them is just magnificent. Such seductive phrases draw me in so deeply that I can't stop reading from the first to the final verse. A beautiful dream, one I don't want to wake up from; best of luck in the contest, Vijay. This is my fave.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 7:44:00 AM
I am delighted by your presence on my page my friend. Your comments always make my day. Much appreciate your glowing feedback, Lasaad. Many thanks. You may want to know that your FAVE did not register.
Date: 10/6/2022 4:15:00 PM
This is indeed a beauteous dream one where the dreamer would never want to waken, gl in the contest Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 7:41:00 AM
Yes indeed! Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna. Many thanks.
Date: 10/6/2022 3:20:00 PM
Such a beautiful dream written about with beautiful rhyme Vijay! I have found yet another Favorite. These attractive lines, pull me right into the reading. Well done!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2022 7:40:00 AM
So very kind of you to say so. Much enjoyed reading your comments, Heidi. Many thanks for the kind remarks and a very special thank you for the FAVE.