Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Life's a Beauteous Dream

I dreamt a dream that renewed kindred memories
Rekindling past passions of moonlit love-themes,
Enamoring love-embers blooming heartfelt longings,
Crooning hints-romantic~ life’s a beauteous dream;

When merrily you enthralled me in springs of yore
Fetching yesteryears’ treasured keepsakes to fore
Lauding pages of albums seasons bygone adored
Reviving ardent allure, questing for love evermore.

I recognized fervid smiles of twinkles in your eyes
Tethered bashfully to arc of love on fulgent skies,
As together we watched winsome emotions climb
Inscribing on celestial canvas, halo of love sublime;

Just as Venus smiled and Moon winked impishly 
When brilliant stars avowed~ forever we shall be,
And song of lark strummed of a mirthful morning,
Rising in paradise you envisioned for you and me.

Embraced in delight through night’s blissful fantasy
Inflaming love’s yearnings stoking endearing instincts,
Ascribing form and meaning to abandoned reveries,
Greeting me, you agreed~ life’s a beauteous dream.

October 6, 2022
Placed 1st: The Mystical Dream Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Ink Empress March 24, 2024 at 11:22 AM Dear Vijay! What a profound and brilliant writ this is! I absolutely love this poem, it gives me the shakespearre vibe! Just impeccable diction, metaphors and imagery. The way you express emotions is unique and worth reading always. I remember reading one of your poems when i first joined soup, and i instantly knew your work would be something i would enjoy. And i was right! I especially love “ Just as Venus smiled and Moon winked impishly When brilliant stars avowed~ forever we shall be” FAV

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 15, 2023 at 10:06 AM A jewel of a poem, with many lovely, memorable lines.

Heidi Sands October 30, 2022 at 6:51 AM Congratulations for your top win Vijay :)

Sotto Poet October 22, 2022 at 11:55 AM Back with heartfelt congratulations on your contest top winning amply deserved placement, Dear Vijay. Blessings my friend

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2022 at 12:55 PM a beauteous poem for a beauteous dream, Vijay. Very nice!

Bj Legros Kelley October 18, 2022 at 12:55 PM Wow, incredibly romantic, beautiful and steeped in love. Precious memories. This is a wonderful write sweet Vijay <3

Sara Kendrick October 11, 2022 at 7:30 AM Ahhh!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Very passionate work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara Vijay Pandit October 13, 2022 at 6:10 AM Thank you Sara--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile October 11, 2022 at 4:33 AM What a great entry for the contest Vijay!! So very full of dreamlike imagery! Your style shines through this gem!! happy Tuesday!! Vijay Pandit October 13, 2022 at 6:09 AM Glad you stopped by Mike. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Eve Roper October 10, 2022 at 5:15 PM Embraced in delight through night’s blissful fantasy , beautiful. Vijay Pandit October 13, 2022 at 6:09 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Eve. Many thanks.

Linda Alice Fowler October 10, 2022 at 7:31 AM So sweetly romantic and beautifully penned Vijay. I love the repetition of your "...beauteous dream." Linda Vijay Pandit October 13, 2022 at 6:09 AM Thank you Linda--much appreciate.

Joseph P. DiMino October 9, 2022 at 12:28 PM "Embraced in delight through night’s blissful fantasy Inflaming love’s yearnings stoking endearing instincts, Ascribing form and meaning to abandoned reveries, Greeting me, you agreed~ life’s a beauteous dream." A treasure! Watch this about romantic dreams, you will love: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26tIOTH2u4g Vijay Pandit October 9, 2022 at 1:48 PM Thank you Joe--glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate your visit as always. Yes indeed--I liked the presentation you referred me to.

Joseph May October 9, 2022 at 8:34 AM A beautiful dream with enchanted scenes, Wonderful write Vijay Vijay Pandit October 9, 2022 at 1:46 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Alexis Y. October 9, 2022 at 6:04 AM WoW! Vijay, This is an good entry for the contest. Good content and imagery. You are an exceptional writer. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit October 9, 2022 at 1:46 PM Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate--many thanks, Alexis.

Bill Baker October 8, 2022 at 9:36 PM Excellennt poetry, Vijay. I thought your imagery and descriptions were dreamy and poetic. Your entry should do well, my friend. Thanks for sharing the poetry of your love. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Vijay Pandit October 9, 2022 at 1:45 PM Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks, Bill.

Janice Canerdy October 8, 2022 at 6:12 AM Vijay, this is such a beautiful, romantic, vividly descriptive piece! I wish I could have dreams like this. Janice Vijay Pandit October 8, 2022 at 7:20 AM So very kind of you to say so, Janice. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman October 8, 2022 at 2:25 AM Love your dream Vijay. Vijay Pandit October 8, 2022 at 7:19 AM Goad you liked the poem, Harry. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole October 7, 2022 at 6:37 PM "Rekindling kindred memories, moonlit love-themes." Anything is *possible* in a dream. This is beautiful in every way, Vijay. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit October 8, 2022 at 7:19 AM You are right my friend--anything is possible in a dream. Much appreciate your kind feedback, as always, Brandy. Many thanks for your wonderful presence on my page.

Paul Callus October 7, 2022 at 12:44 PM Life can certainly be a beautiful dream, especially if presented in the way this poem does, Vijay. For a moment I was given a rare look into the garden of Eden! ~ Regards // paul Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 2:21 PM Glad you enjoyed the poem, Paul. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks. Regards.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 7, 2022 at 7:17 AM A symphony of divine verses that delight the heart, and the mind of the reader, my dearest friend, Vijay! A FAVE for me. Blessings. Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 7:51 AM So nice to hear that--especially from a learned friend like you, Demetrios. Many thanks for your kind remarks and a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Valsa George October 7, 2022 at 5:53 AM A poem of intense longing full of passion to travel back to the days of romantic love. When sweet memories come as dreams, we wish the dream should never end. But sad we cannot dream for ever. As ever, so beautifully written with romantic ardour. All the Best Vijay! Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 7:50 AM Much kindness in your thoughts, Valsa. I always appreciate your insightful remarks and analysis. Many thanks.

Sara Kendrick October 7, 2022 at 4:42 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. It is good to dream good dreams each night and also some daydreams as well. Sara Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 7:48 AM Thank you Sara for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit as always.

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2022 at 11:10 PM Wish I had such romantic dreams. Usually I get nightmares. Wonderful thoughts, metaphors and imagery. Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 7:48 AM Many thanks for your support, Victor. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Michael Tor October 6, 2022 at 5:37 PM I love your loving Metaphors that transcend you into reality, you reel the reader in with an adoration for a beloved and carry us through in romantic feelings for her and at the end were reminded it was a dream. Love how you made us forget of the dream state and made us awake in the moment to feel each word and then at the end to bring us back to a dream. Clever play on words but more importantly Vijay was the love in your metaphors that were unique and beautiful and it is always a trademark... Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 7:47 AM Your kindness shows everywhere on Soup--for you spread goodwill on every page you visit. I always appreciate reading your detailed insights, Michael. Many thanks for your glowing remarks my friend. Michael Tor October 6, 2022 at 5:40 PM of yours to reach for the magic in words less travelled through the narrow gate of great Poetry. Impressive as always my friend, another exceptional entry by you. God bless you Vijay for your marvelous Creativity and choosing of words...

Sotto Poet October 6, 2022 at 4:32 PM My dear friend, Vijay, your exquisite metaphors are of the highest caliber, and the lexicon you choose to portray them is just magnificent. Such seductive phrases draw me in so deeply that I can't stop reading from the first to the final verse. A beautiful dream, one I don't want to wake up from; best of luck in the contest, Vijay. This is my fave. Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 7:44 AM I am delighted by your presence on my page my friend. Your comments always make my day. Much appreciate your glowing feedback, Lasaad. Many thanks. You may want to know that your FAVE did not register.

Mystic Rose Rose October 6, 2022 at 4:15 PM This is indeed a beauteous dream one where the dreamer would never want to waken, gl in the contest Vijay Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 7:41 AM Yes indeed! Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna. Many thanks.

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