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Life Sentence

The needle slides in Like a petrified snake The dope shot in, Time is a fake But it's his break. Oblivion sets in. Content he dreams Of far off misty lands sweet musk, delicious tastes. Oh heavenly dope, how it redeems! Suddenly he wakes. There's no one near him to care. No one to kiss with love so rare. Around is silence, Deadly and bare He wipes away a tear. Time has passed quickly, The sands in the hourly glass pass by. Breath smothers him. Wearily he drags himself Towards his boring day A prisoner for life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/15/2021 8:33:00 AM
I feel for such people the most, people who put to sleep through dope all their sores, but wake to see all of them circling round to sting with vengeance like wasps. Powerful presentation, Victor !
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Date: 11/8/2021 2:46:00 AM
So sad but so true for many lost souls. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 11/7/2021 11:06:00 PM
The sad state of addicts has been wonderfully presented here, Victor:) great work:)
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Date: 11/7/2021 7:10:00 PM
All too often for way too many…
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Date: 11/7/2021 4:03:00 PM
Addiction is a dreadful, sorry state to be in. Your poem is a harrowing glimpse into drug dependency...Delice
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Date: 11/7/2021 9:17:00 AM
at first I did not get that this was a dope addict. I was thinking he was getting lethal injection in prison or something. Good grief. what is wrong with me. Anyway, now I get it, and it makes a lot of sense.
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Date: 11/7/2021 7:59:00 AM
This is the life story of so many dear Victor, only God can ease that kind of pain and bring momentary comfort, needles are only temporary fixes, you can have my smile today :)
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Date: 11/7/2021 1:25:00 AM
So deep but you have penned it beautifully... Loved the emotions...
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Date: 11/6/2021 3:15:00 PM
Addiction causes all involved such pain, yet that momentary trip to oblivion keeps one hooked and indeed a prisoner. It is very sad for all. Your poem is relatable to anyone who has faced the demons. Powerfully expressed Victor. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 11/6/2021 2:03:00 PM
- Many people suffer from loneliness ... it feels so empty ... and painful ... quiet ... and cruel, Victor ... - Warm thoughts to you, my friend ... take care ... hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2021 12:47:00 PM
Victor wow! This is so vivid you bring the addict to life. Powerful penning.
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Date: 11/6/2021 10:32:00 AM
Drugs are deceptive and extremely destructive, and your brilliant poem highlights the devastating effects of usage quite well. Evelyn
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Date: 11/6/2021 9:56:00 AM
A life sentence it surely is when one can’t live without a fix. It’s an ongoing nightmare for those parents and friends of those dope addicts out there. Excellent write Victor… Belle
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Date: 11/6/2021 9:47:00 AM
Dark stark reality of drug addiction …
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Date: 11/6/2021 7:15:00 AM
Addiction is a dreadful place to be. Meaningful write, Victor. You give them voice--their loneliness in life and inability to have control over daily routine.
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Date: 11/6/2021 5:55:00 AM
That's so melancholic. Very well penned. They say all is well that ends well. May be all have a peaceful end. But may we all have a life full of life, joy and peace. Ameen
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Date: 11/6/2021 2:28:00 AM
Sometimes life feels like that Victor and we feel trapped, we just have to make the best of it. Tom
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