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Life Or Death

This poem isn't written from my point of view, but i have felt like this before. With this poem that a lot of people feel like this and that if you ever feel like this never choose the latter of this poem, always choose the initial. Life is pain I feel worthless I feel used I feel pain I feel pitied. Death is peace Death is relaxing Death brings pain Deaths brings hell. Life and death What do I choose? Only I know What do you choose? Only you know Most choose life Others choose death Can I get an answer, please? Shall I run a knife across my throat or my wrists? Not even I know. Shall I take a gun to my heart or my head? No one knows. Shall I poison myself, drown myself, hang myself even? Only life will tell the truth to my questions Life or Death? I’m leaning towards the latter Yours must be towards the initial. I feel second and horrible “What is the answer?” Is all I ask.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2016 2:16:00 AM
QUINN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:06:00 PM
Quinn, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
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Date: 12/14/2012 12:03:00 PM
This is so sad, Derby. We all find ourselves in some dark place sometimes...I don't aim to advise you, but, no matter how difficult it gets, just choose to live...in living, there's always a thread of hope...whereas in death, there is NONE. God bless you. Annalise
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