Life On the Dock

Like silent sentries in a row
dock pylons await our arrival.
It is low tide, as I step onto the gangway.
Crusty barnacles cling tenaciously 
to the pylons, while salt water
laps the rocky shoreline.

A lanky blue heron carefully picks its way
between the fingers of the dock.
The cool breeze picks up 
making the boats bob to and fro. 

Halyard lines clang 
against the masts of sailboats
while weather vanes turn toward 
the prevailing northwest winds

The pungent smell of sea salt air
and the cool mist upon my face
evoke thoughts of escape 
and high sea adventures.

As ocean breeze wafts gently 
I close my eyes, inhale the fresh air
and give myself over to the sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hamilton Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 8:47 AM
This is beautiful writing Laura, sorry I'm late trying to catch up. A7
Leiser Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Thanks, John, for your kind words, and giving me the high rating :)
Leiser Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Thanks, John, for your kind words, and giving me the high rating :)
Yates Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 11:51 PM
I've been there! And I like that free verse.
Leiser Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 12:01 AM
Thanks, Bill. I love to experience life near the ocean. I appreciate your comment!
Fleming Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 2:43 PM
What a lovely poem. I am truly surprised that i am the first to comment.
Leiser Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Thank you! I appreciate you reading it! :)
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