Life of An Ice Cube

Natures gem solid Cold, now taken in my hand Her back in arched shape To her nape, warmth slowly melts Witnessing trickles running Down her spine it flows Curvaceous sighs quivering In hungered view, I Retrace it's path to her nape Fingers now cold in excite .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gifford Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 9:58 AM
Icy pleasures reap love's treasures.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 9:55 AM
I see it sizzling on hot skin. Cool it baby.
Lindley Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Very wise use of a cold device. A hot write about a cold subject Flowers, chocolates and back massages work well too. Solid 7 on this one my friend. A very hard task to give so much in just eight short lines. Imagination stirred is so often key to fine poetry..
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 6:40 AM
ice ice baby comes to mind - made me smile James very sensual:-) Hugs jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 6:14 AM
.... A very "hot" Ice Cube ...... romantic - Happy weekend, James :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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