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Life Lessons Learned

Grief took me by the hand Lead where I didn't want to go Straight into the valley of tears That began to constantly flow Now that grief had acquainted me With sorrow in the vale of tears It seemed at eternal spring of weeping Was where I would constantly live Then grief brought me up the mount Where loved ones went before When escorted in this place The lessons to which exposed Seems now working my way back Changed forever from that meeting Grief an aquaintance I had spurned But now after the greeting I will never be the same Though given another hundred years Grief taught me more in a few short fears Than joy with all her pleasings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/29/2011 8:25:00 AM
Very good poetry of your experience.
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Date: 1/20/2011 5:02:00 PM
Hi Sara, what a lovely piece of poetry.it ain't easy losing someone close.You really go through 1000 different emotions.I am so glad you shared this with us .Greetings.Wm
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:29:00 AM
I was moved by your poem today, Sara, well written! And thank you for all your kind comments!....Gert
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Date: 1/18/2011 4:09:00 PM
yes sara so much here that you have lived through, i am pleased to read your work, and i found your great comment on gloopier. thank you.
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Date: 1/18/2011 3:08:00 PM
I heard that grief and turmoil, once conquered, makes a person stronger. I suppose, but certainly not happier. Good lesson, Sara. LOve, Dave
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Date: 1/18/2011 12:38:00 PM
I admire your positive attitude, Sara. God sends challenges our way and we grow by learning to meet them. You surely have been through this in the past few months. Blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 11:44:00 AM
Inspirational - death and grief are always there in life - the realisation of this sharpens your living - beautifully expressed, Sara - Liz
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:07:00 AM
Grief can do a lot to a person and we never know where it will carry us. We have to have faith and strength and learn how to deal with it. It is a lesson learned. Love Phyl
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Date: 1/18/2011 6:52:00 AM
have you ever seen the movie "Saw" they have several versions II, III, IV. these are what the last two lines are about. john h loving iii
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Date: 1/18/2011 6:48:00 AM
a good lesson learned Sara. never again let grief lead you to where you don't want to go. i enjoyed reading.
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