Life Lessons Learned

Grief took me by the hand
Lead where I didn't want to go
Straight into the valley of tears
That began to constantly flow

Now that grief had acquainted me
With sorrow in the vale of tears
It seemed at eternal spring of weeping
Was where I would constantly live

Then grief brought me up the mount
Where loved ones went before
When escorted in this place 
The lessons to which exposed

Seems now working my way back
Changed forever from that meeting
Grief an aquaintance I had spurned
But now after the greeting

I will never be the same 
Though given another hundred years
Grief taught me more in a few short fears
Than joy with all her pleasings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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L Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Very good poetry of your experience.
Willis Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Hi Sara, what a lovely piece of poetry.it ain't easy losing someone close.You really go through 1000 different emotions.I am so glad you shared this with us .Greetings.Wm
Knop Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 6:29 AM
I was moved by your poem today, Sara, well written! And thank you for all your kind comments!....Gert
Maverick Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 4:09 PM
yes sara so much here that you have lived through, i am pleased to read your work, and i found your great comment on gloopier. thank you.
Austin Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 3:08 PM
I heard that grief and turmoil, once conquered, makes a person stronger. I suppose, but certainly not happier. Good lesson, Sara. LOve, Dave
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January 18, 2011 at 12:38 PM
I admire your positive attitude, Sara. God sends challenges our way and we grow by learning to meet them. You surely have been through this in the past few months. Blessings, Carolyn
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January 18, 2011 at 11:44 AM
Inspirational - death and grief are always there in life - the realisation of this sharpens your living - beautifully expressed, Sara - Liz
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January 18, 2011 at 9:07 AM
Grief can do a lot to a person and we never know where it will carry us. We have to have faith and strength and learn how to deal with it. It is a lesson learned. Love Phyl
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January 18, 2011 at 6:52 AM
have you ever seen the movie "Saw" they have several versions II, III, IV. these are what the last two lines are about. john h loving iii
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January 18, 2011 at 6:48 AM
a good lesson learned Sara. never again let grief lead you to where you don't want to go. i enjoyed reading.
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