Life Lessons Learned

Grief took me by the hand
Lead where I didn't want to go
Straight into the valley of tears
That began to constantly flow

Now that grief had acquainted me
With sorrow in the vale of tears
It seemed at eternal spring of weeping
Was where I would constantly live

Then grief brought me up the mount
Where loved ones went before
When escorted in this place 
The lessons to which exposed

Seems now working my way back
Changed forever from that meeting
Grief an aquaintance I had spurned
But now after the greeting

I will never be the same 
Though given another hundred years
Grief taught me more in a few short fears
Than joy with all her pleasings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/29/2011 8:25:00 AM
Very good poetry of your experience.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2011 5:02:00 PM
Hi Sara, what a lovely piece of poetry.it ain't easy losing someone close.You really go through 1000 different emotions.I am so glad you shared this with us .Greetings.Wm
Login to Reply
Date: 1/19/2011 6:29:00 AM
I was moved by your poem today, Sara, well written! And thank you for all your kind comments!....Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 4:09:00 PM
yes sara so much here that you have lived through, i am pleased to read your work, and i found your great comment on gloopier. thank you.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 3:08:00 PM
I heard that grief and turmoil, once conquered, makes a person stronger. I suppose, but certainly not happier. Good lesson, Sara. LOve, Dave
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 12:38:00 PM
I admire your positive attitude, Sara. God sends challenges our way and we grow by learning to meet them. You surely have been through this in the past few months. Blessings, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 11:44:00 AM
Inspirational - death and grief are always there in life - the realisation of this sharpens your living - beautifully expressed, Sara - Liz
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 9:07:00 AM
Grief can do a lot to a person and we never know where it will carry us. We have to have faith and strength and learn how to deal with it. It is a lesson learned. Love Phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 6:52:00 AM
have you ever seen the movie "Saw" they have several versions II, III, IV. these are what the last two lines are about. john h loving iii
Login to Reply
Date: 1/18/2011 6:48:00 AM
a good lesson learned Sara. never again let grief lead you to where you don't want to go. i enjoyed reading.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter