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Life Is What You Make It

Birth adorns the gush of flowers Across a patch that lifts boughs’ grace Where Grandma tends a day's embrace Mellowing the closure of hours. The lucent sun pours dewy gold On mounds changing autumn to snow Her eyes agleam from sprouts below As dahlia buds peep and unfold. I gaze to watch her fingers dip Into new stems between the leaves Forgetting that age now weighs on sleeves; Yet, garden blooms of life’s worship. Today, dahlias lay on her earth Surrounding a crypt, the flowers’ bride When glory of morn stands aside, In languid blush of Grandma’s death.
~ Dave Woods' Life Is What You Make It Contest by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/16/2014 1:10:00 PM
This is very nice Nette ,,,,,, Have a nice blessed Easter :)
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Date: 3/24/2014 3:57:00 PM
Wow, you do have a way with words nette. Sounds like quite a personal write. Congrats on 1st place. Well deserved.
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Date: 3/22/2014 3:51:00 AM
I was talking with a coworker about light traveling through a prism and it dawned on me while reading your poem that we are that body of light and we do have to pass through conduits sometimes, whether in life or death. Very sincerely and very detailed. I wish I could reflect light as beautiful as you do. Top notch.
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Date: 3/19/2014 9:19:00 PM
A beautiful and lovely write about your grandmother. Congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:35:00 PM
WOW what a beautiful piece, on many levels also, GREAT JOB my friend. and also thanks for your wonderful comment. cheri
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:41:00 PM
Hi Nette, It is what it is, and I love what you made of this poem... Congrats. ~have a nice day~ <3 LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 10:25:00 AM
It was cold not acknowledging your win. I shall spread warmth. Congratulations for the win. Sorry.
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Date: 3/19/2014 10:15:00 AM
Good. Keep the poetic flames glowing. Will follow.
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:39:00 AM
Great write! Congratulations nette, a well-deserved win.
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations nette!!! awesome piece... that is what you made it! ^__^ .. thank you for a placement of my poem in your recent contest.. ;'0)) You're still the reigning poet queen!! ..big hugggs!!! ^__^
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "Life is what YOU make it!" Sponsored by: Dave Wood. - Wonderful win, Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/19/2014 3:46:00 AM
:) KUDOS!!!! a beauty in every word.. :) nice nice!!! God bless.. :)
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Date: 3/19/2014 3:23:00 AM
Written with your usual unique style and elegant grace...Congratulations my friend and thanks SO much for the contest placement - Tim
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Date: 3/19/2014 12:42:00 AM
Congratulations Nette. This was beautiful... Lucilla
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Date: 3/18/2014 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest on Life, nette
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Date: 3/18/2014 9:17:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on Dave's contest, Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/18/2014 8:01:00 PM
Oh nett....what an amazing journey...life's worship..that's the way we should approach each day...precious...much congrats to you
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Date: 3/18/2014 7:04:00 PM
Beautiful Nette. Congratulations on the win... Verlena
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Date: 3/18/2014 6:57:00 PM
Very creative way to do the contest. You must have scored high. I will have to go see that winners' list soon!! Congrats to you and thanks for the inspiration of the crystal contest.
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Date: 3/18/2014 6:10:00 PM
Beautiful and splendid piece..Great write from a great poet...Congrats on your win..XOXO....
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Date: 3/18/2014 5:47:00 PM
This is truly amazing nette. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 3/18/2014 5:36:00 PM
The lucent sunpours dewy gold....sheer beauty...congrats on your win
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Date: 3/18/2014 5:28:00 PM
This is the epitome of life and death! I certainly enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this evening! What a beautiful piece my friend! Such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/18/2014 5:12:00 PM
Congrats Nette on a beautiful poem and on our merited win. // paul
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Date: 3/18/2014 4:52:00 PM
"forgetting that age now weighs on sleeves"....... oh goodness, what a lovely, melancholy, and poignant line that is. Lovely as always, Nette. And dear Nette, thank you very much for my placement in the crystal contest.....such an honor to be with such gifted poets at my side. Thank you!
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