Life Is What You Make It

Birth adorns the gush of flowers Across a patch that lifts boughs’ grace Where Grandma tends a day's embrace Mellowing the closure of hours. The lucent sun pours dewy gold On mounds changing autumn to snow Her eyes agleam from sprouts below As dahlia buds peep and unfold. I gaze to watch her fingers dip Into new stems between the leaves Forgetting that age now weighs on sleeves; Yet, garden blooms of life’s worship. Today, dahlias lay on her earth Surrounding a crypt, the flowers’ bride When glory of morn stands aside, In languid blush of Grandma’s death.
~ Dave Woods' Life Is What You Make It Contest by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duncan Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 1:10 PM
This is very nice Nette ,,,,,, Have a nice blessed Easter :)
Johnson Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 3:57 PM
Wow, you do have a way with words nette. Sounds like quite a personal write. Congrats on 1st place. Well deserved.
Riley Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 3:51 AM
I was talking with a coworker about light traveling through a prism and it dawned on me while reading your poem that we are that body of light and we do have to pass through conduits sometimes, whether in life or death. Very sincerely and very detailed. I wish I could reflect light as beautiful as you do. Top notch.
Macfarlane Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 9:19 PM
A beautiful and lovely write about your grandmother. Congrats on your win. Hugs
Dunn Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:35 PM
WOW what a beautiful piece, on many levels also, GREAT JOB my friend. and also thanks for your wonderful comment. cheri
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:41 PM
Hi Nette, It is what it is, and I love what you made of this poem... Congrats. ~have a nice day~ <3 LINDA
Raj Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 10:25 AM
It was cold not acknowledging your win. I shall spread warmth. Congratulations for the win. Sorry.
Raj Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Good. Keep the poetic flames glowing. Will follow.
White Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Great write! Congratulations nette, a well-deserved win.
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Congratulations nette!!! awesome piece... that is what you made it! ^__^ .. thank you for a placement of my poem in your recent contest.. ;'0)) You're still the reigning poet queen!! ..big hugggs!!! ^__^
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:21 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "Life is what YOU make it!" Sponsored by: Dave Wood. - Wonderful win, Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 3:46 AM
:) KUDOS!!!! a beauty in every word.. :) nice nice!!! God bless.. :)
Ryerson Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 3:23 AM
Written with your usual unique style and elegant grace...Congratulations my friend and thanks SO much for the contest placement - Tim
Carrillo Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:42 AM
Congratulations Nette. This was beautiful... Lucilla
Mehta Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest on Life, nette
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Nette, Congrats on Dave's contest, Love ~SKAT~
Jones Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 8:01 PM
Oh nett....what an amazing journey...life's worship..that's the way we should approach each day...precious...much congrats to you
Walker  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 7:04 PM
Beautiful Nette. Congratulations on the win... Verlena
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Very creative way to do the contest. You must have scored high. I will have to go see that winners' list soon!! Congrats to you and thanks for the inspiration of the crystal contest.
Arowolo Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Beautiful and splendid piece..Great write from a great poet...Congrats on your win..XOXO....
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 5:47 PM
This is truly amazing nette. Congratulations on the win.
Parker Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 5:36 PM
The lucent sunpours dewy gold....sheer beauty...congrats on your win
Sivey Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 5:28 PM
This is the epitome of life and death! I certainly enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this evening! What a beautiful piece my friend! Such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
Callus Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 5:12 PM
Congrats Nette on a beautiful poem and on our merited win. // paul
Richards Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 4:52 PM
"forgetting that age now weighs on sleeves"....... oh goodness, what a lovely, melancholy, and poignant line that is. Lovely as always, Nette. And dear Nette, thank you very much for my placement in the crystal contest.....such an honor to be with such gifted poets at my side. Thank you!
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