life is mystic

Life-a word of four letters
a quest runs in four corners
found diverse in four seasons
yet unsolved since four Yugas

Not appears gruelling but
none can define it truly
no way but confronting as
nothing remains forever

Dark clouds of grief dispersed by
the rapturous new sunshine
heat waves of arduous times
solaced by the cool raindrops

Age takes away steadily
one's power and charisma
the ultimate turn to Him
fills the heart with sublime joy

PLACE: 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Patri, congrats on your win in my contest, like the poem, well done, blessings Constance
Venkata Ramana Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 10:33 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 7:15 AM
I have read your work and am delighted to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem.
mysore Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 10:54 PM
thoughtful. congratulations on your win dear poet.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 2:46 AM
Thank you so much for your compliments.
Greenhough Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:37 PM
This is a good form with points about life and a bit of a prayer. It kept my interest to the end..
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 1:02 AM
Thank you so much for reading my lines.
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