life is mystic

Life-a word of four letters
a quest runs in four corners
found diverse in four seasons
yet unsolved since four Yugas

Not appears gruelling but
none can define it truly
no way but confronting as
nothing remains forever

Dark clouds of grief dispersed by
the rapturous new sunshine
heat waves of arduous times
solaced by the cool raindrops

Age takes away steadily
one's power and charisma
the ultimate turn to Him
fills the heart with sublime joy

PLACE: 3rd

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Date: 11/13/2024 12:06:00 PM
Patri, congrats on your win in my contest, like the poem, well done, blessings Constance
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 11/13/2024 10:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 10/20/2024 7:15:00 AM
I have read your work and am delighted to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/20/2024 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem.
Date: 10/11/2024 10:54:00 PM
thoughtful. congratulations on your win dear poet.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/12/2024 2:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your compliments.
Date: 10/10/2024 5:37:00 PM
This is a good form with points about life and a bit of a prayer. It kept my interest to the end..
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/11/2024 1:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my lines.
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