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life is mystic

Life-a word of four letters a quest runs in four corners found diverse in four seasons yet unsolved since four Yugas Not appears gruelling but none can define it truly no way but confronting as nothing remains forever Dark clouds of grief dispersed by the rapturous new sunshine heat waves of arduous times solaced by the cool raindrops Age takes away steadily one's power and charisma the ultimate turn to Him fills the heart with sublime joy PLACE: 3rd

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Date: 11/13/2024 12:06:00 PM
Patri, congrats on your win in my contest, like the poem, well done, blessings Constance
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 11/13/2024 10:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 10/20/2024 7:15:00 AM
I have read your work and am delighted to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/20/2024 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem.
Date: 10/11/2024 10:54:00 PM
thoughtful. congratulations on your win dear poet.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/12/2024 2:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your compliments.
Date: 10/10/2024 5:37:00 PM
This is a good form with points about life and a bit of a prayer. It kept my interest to the end..
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/11/2024 1:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my lines.

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