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                   January 5, 2024

"Life is a song," I find it intriguing,
how often the roads we journey upon 
allude to lyrics like variant moods of songs.
Some days I endeavor to sing, 
but the words come out all wrong.
Orchestral phrasing holds no cadence, 
no tuneful rhythm relegated to dance
when love has taken a clumsy misstep 
in the melancholy realm of romance.

Every note is out of sync when played
if no harmony can be found.
I become dolefully dismayed,
afraid to hum a single chord 
of mellifluous melodies I once knew.
Then, sorrow is my burden to bear,
weighing heavily upon my suffering soul.

Sunsets no longer hold interest for me,
so, I refuse to view them alone.
Hearing love songs I should be singing
sting me with maudlin emotions.
I'd rather listen to the trilling voices 
of cooing songbirds and nightingales
instead of humming a song sung blue 
when there's nothing left to be said.

But I would sing an aria ~ acapella, 
my voice raised to be heard,
with every love song I could recall. 
Each refrain and every romantic word.
I would resound each alluring interlude 
with sultry yearning and desire.
When life if filled with happiness, 
I eagerly light the torch on fire.

I would serenade chirping sparrows 
who warble on my window sill
from the dappled dawn of first daylight
until purple heather shades of twilight.
And yet, I could not suppress the need
to sing a nocturnal lullaby
to lovely Luna, the luminous moon 
and the radiance of each shining star.

Life is a song that composes its own music.
Everlasting love, if you take hold of me, 
my only wish is to be where you are ~ eternally.

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Date: 4/28/2024 7:37:00 PM
I think I'm in love. Wonderful poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Date: 2/16/2024 5:59:00 PM
Lin! I wish I had better words to offer you, but I simply don't have the vocabulary to leave a comment good enough for this poem. All I can say is, wow! I love the theme of the poem, the sophistication of your words, and how poetic it reads. I especially love the 5th stanza. The underrated aspect of this poem is how well it sounds phonetically. Reading it aloud sounds like a love language itself. Well done, madam.
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Date: 2/17/2024 8:54:00 AM
Au contraire, Shane. Your comments are the fruits of labor to me. I'm delighted to learn that you read poetry aloud. It really makes a difference to comprehending its meaning and value. Thank you ever so much for reading me and leaving your supportive thoughts.
Date: 1/13/2024 7:46:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations
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Date: 2/17/2024 8:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Karen.
Date: 1/13/2024 2:37:00 AM
Dear Lin lane, this is absolutely stunning and so well woven with exquisite wordplay that goes with the theme life is a song, it feels like a vulnerable soulful write. And theres so many lines that truly touched my heart as i read them especially “ Sunsets no longer hold interest for me, so, I refuse to view them alone.“ and that ethereal ending just blew me away, as you wrote “ my only wish is to be where you are eternally “ that hits so strong in a delicate manner that depicts longing! CONGRATULATIONS
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Date: 1/13/2024 7:37:00 AM
Thank you very much for the placement in your contest, Ink as well as for the detailed remarks about the lines you enjoyed the most.
Date: 1/6/2024 4:00:00 AM
Full of meaning, music and a magical use of language to chase and bring back a song to lay out on the page...take a bow Lin for this composition. One to replay.
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Date: 1/8/2024 6:04:00 AM
Oh a replay from you is better than a winning placement. Thanks, Paul.
Date: 1/5/2024 3:50:00 PM
oh lin such an emotional piece you poem is music to my ears from those - mellifluous melodies you once knew to chirping sparrows, and the lullaby to la luna a joy to read:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/8/2024 6:03:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, Chick. You got me. ;-)
Date: 1/5/2024 11:00:00 AM
I love the lines "Orchestral phrasing holds no cadence...when love has taken a clumsy misstep in the melancholy realm of romance." I think I've been down this road before, but I always seem to find my way back. I enjoyed your poem, Lin.
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Date: 1/5/2024 11:16:00 AM
Hello, John. It's always good to hear from you. Several roads for some of us, but we're still around and writing about our journeys. Thank you. All is well and good with me, and I sincerely hope the same for you.
Date: 1/5/2024 9:38:00 AM
Beautiful poem, full of emotions. Well penned.
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Date: 1/5/2024 9:44:00 AM
Hi, Jay and thanks a lot for your support.
Date: 1/5/2024 8:44:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Well written.
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Date: 1/5/2024 9:05:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read this one, Jeanette. It's a titch long, but I appreciate your comments.
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