Life Is A

Life is a puddle You can either jump over Or jump straight in

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/21/2023 2:05:00 PM

clever write, Deb. We all have choices to make--to jump around a situation and avoid it or jump in and deal with it. Powerful stuff here, Sara

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/12/2023 3:19:00 PM

Love this Deb. Knowing me, I would probably jump straight over! It’s a verse that makes you ponder that’s for sure. Enjoyed it thank you :) :)

Deb M
Date: 9/14/2023 9:21:00 AM

Oh Christina you sound sensible and so sweet! Im glad it made you ponder….thankyou so much….Debx

Emilia James

Date: 9/12/2023 10:03:00 AM

I jump in them, over them and skip through them. I am just a big kid at heart. Emilia : )

Deb M
Date: 9/14/2023 9:19:00 AM

I believe that you are Emilia….l too have a very strong inner child side….my husband often says in fun “ how old are you Deb” hehe….thankyou my nee friend! Debx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/10/2023 3:52:00 PM

Me Deb Fall head 1st in it With a live audience For other people's Amusement

Deb M
Date: 9/14/2023 9:17:00 AM

That made me smile Christopher …..that sounds similar to me!! Haha …..thankyou my friend! Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/9/2023 7:49:00 PM

and I always thought it was a bowl of cherries! ~ Mr. Pitts

Deb M
Date: 9/10/2023 6:53:00 AM

Nope its puddles now!! Thanks BB….Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/9/2023 5:14:00 PM

I've always preferred to jump in. You never know what treasure is hiding in there. Love the analogy. Have a blessed day my friend.

Deb M
Date: 9/10/2023 6:53:00 AM

Thanks my new poetry friend! Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 9/9/2023 4:35:00 PM

Love the analogy, Deb. Can’t help wondering if you got our ‘The Vicar Of Dibley’ on Aussie TV. If not I suspect a google of ‘Vicar of dibley, puddle scene’ would amuse you.

Deb M
Date: 9/10/2023 6:52:00 AM

I love The Vicar of Dibley….could watch it over and over and never tire of it….hilarious!! In fact l just love British humour and think they are the best comedies on t.v! Cheers big ears!!! Debx