Life Grinding Through a Mill

I often watched  him tirelessly sifting
Grains of native corn in a rusty mill-
     Those arms a kinetic flush, quicker than
     July’s heat, as if glazed limestone rubbed
A wavy mane blown by summer’s tossed air :

Perhaps, I have imagined him laboring-
Muscular  taut  and bronzed by scorched hours
His gait languidly aloof fetching water
    Across the pond, a lonesome vignette,
    This image cast-off like a bag of disused husk
Far out behind, steep as the upturned leaves...
Eyes doleful flickering on late noon’s hardened toil.  
While upon paddles, a man’s life seemed to rile  
    Where golden-rod turned to nickel's work,  
    That down old chutes rolled musky sweat of flesh: 

I have beheld him amid dusk’s aftermath  
Of sadness roaming there in faint overalls,   
From his glimpses, the mill of pit and death
    And each lily I clutched for him wilted,  sagging-
    For in my own aloneness, I dared not meet him. 



Gristmill Contest for Craig Cornish
6/3/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George   Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:02 AM
What a tender and profound picture you paint with your words, dear Nette. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Gentry Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:38 AM
Congratulations on your win with this poem so creatively written... well done! :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 9:22 PM
Well deserved win Nette. Congratulations. Tom
Horsman Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 4:57 PM
This is amazing, nette, Craig will have one hell of a hard time, to judge with the entries i have read,
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 2:06 PM
- Amazing poem, Nette :) - I really liked your use of words :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fraser Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 5:46 PM
This is a very good and expressive piece Nette. I enjoyed the read alot. You definately took me there. Blessings Carl
Marty Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 2:22 PM
Wow! The hard labor and mundane existence in a mill as seen through the eyes of both participant and observer is a daunting poetic task. This piece of art is exceptional, mysterious on all levels!
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Amazing and infringing writing as always dearest, nette! A pleasure to read! Good luck!
Smith Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Brilliant Nette, best wishes...
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