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Life Grinding Through a Mill

I often watched him tirelessly sifting Grains of native corn in a rusty mill- Those arms a kinetic flush, quicker than July’s heat, as if glazed limestone rubbed A wavy mane blown by summer’s tossed air : Perhaps, I have imagined him laboring- Muscular taut and bronzed by scorched hours His gait languidly aloof fetching water Across the pond, a lonesome vignette, This image cast-off like a bag of disused husk Far out behind, steep as the upturned leaves... Eyes doleful flickering on late noon’s hardened toil. While upon paddles, a man’s life seemed to rile Where golden-rod turned to nickel's work, That down old chutes rolled musky sweat of flesh: I have beheld him amid dusk’s aftermath Of sadness roaming there in faint overalls, From his glimpses, the mill of pit and death And each lily I clutched for him wilted, sagging- For in my own aloneness, I dared not meet him. Gristmill Contest for Craig Cornish 6/3/2018

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Date: 6/22/2018 9:02:00 AM
What a tender and profound picture you paint with your words, dear Nette. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 6/22/2018 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this poem so creatively written... well done! :)
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Date: 6/18/2018 9:22:00 PM
Well deserved win Nette. Congratulations. Tom
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Date: 6/4/2018 4:57:00 PM
This is amazing, nette, Craig will have one hell of a hard time, to judge with the entries i have read,
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:06:00 PM
- Amazing poem, Nette :) - I really liked your use of words :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/3/2018 5:46:00 PM
This is a very good and expressive piece Nette. I enjoyed the read alot. You definately took me there. Blessings Carl
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Date: 6/3/2018 2:22:00 PM
Wow! The hard labor and mundane existence in a mill as seen through the eyes of both participant and observer is a daunting poetic task. This piece of art is exceptional, mysterious on all levels!
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Date: 6/3/2018 1:58:00 PM
Amazing and infringing writing as always dearest, nette! A pleasure to read! Good luck!
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Date: 6/3/2018 1:15:00 PM
Brilliant Nette, best wishes...
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