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Life Black and White 4x4 Contest

Life Black and White Life closed lost color twinkling stars Interstate paint scrape broken clustered cars Four men painted on a bright canvas Eternally voided life in empty blackness Remembering everything on turned bright light Discolored eye right hooked bar fight Pass the wedding dress this ones just right Cloak and Dagger clandestine midnight Hot fire torched tipped flame ignite Swimming microscoped magnified parasite Rapped Holy Head freedom fighter Shi'ite Dark hooded beheaded killer of spite Two most commonly bought color cars One turned to dust the other started to rust Water is a must thirsty men eye with lust Life closed lost color twinkling stars

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Date: 2/12/2016 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on HM in this challenging contest! Interesting expression of Black and White theme.
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:38:00 PM
Hi Brian, CONGRATS, on your "pairing master rhyme, winning poem. **LINDA**
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/12/2016 2:57:00 AM
thank you I kinda screwed up but I think I did well for my first contest ever. I just entered the Robin Hood contest and I would be honored if you'd let me know what you really think about it. Have a good night sweetheart
Date: 2/11/2016 9:31:00 PM
Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/11/2016 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much I.appreciate it

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