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Life As I See It....

LIFe. as i see it is distorted and bland. i wish to be on the beach easin my mind in the sand. the sound of the wave's take away my pain. who but me is to blame. i feel happy then sad i wanna ride the never ending train. my eye's n heart seem to rain. LOSING her has left a never ending pain on my brain. on my there's a permenant stain. LIFe as i see it is peaceful sometime's then i get hurlled into my own mind. my thought's i can't find. some day's i feel as if i'm BLIND. I'M mean today tommorrow i could be kind. DONT KNO WHICH 1 IT'LL BE MAYB U'LL FIND. LIFe as i see it is hard to explain. i wanna lay n earase my mind n the rain. m i OKAY? or m i INSANE? LIFe as i see it is like no1 else can. My GRAMMY was my biggest fan. LIFe as i see it is distorted most the time. will i be not right today or will i be fine. I wish the sun could BRIGHTEN my day n make my heart SHINE. LIFe as i see it change's everyday. bring her back to me god i pray. I wanna feel the SUN's ray. what else can i say. i just LIVE lif DAy 2 DAy. LIFe as i see it i wish other's could. there's things i cant do that i know i should. TAKE AWAY MY PAIN I WISH SOME1 ELSE COULD.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/29/2009 12:21:00 PM
Congrats Keeley on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 10:35:00 AM
Keeley
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Date: 4/27/2009 9:37:00 AM
Congrats Keeley on your poem being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 4/27/2009 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. Mine is aso featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/27/2009 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2009 4:55:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem...congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/12/2009 12:42:00 PM
i love it .......
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Date: 4/12/2009 12:40:00 PM
This is so GOOD! i can relate to it soooooooooo much. Thanks for writing it and I hope it has helped you. Happy Easter my friend-Rhonda Kay
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