Life As I See It....

LIFe. as i see it is distorted and bland. i wish to be on the beach easin my mind in the sand. the sound of the wave's take away my pain. who but me is to blame. i feel happy then sad i wanna ride the never ending train. my eye's n heart seem to rain. LOSING her has left a never ending pain on my brain. on my there's a permenant stain. LIFe as i see it is peaceful sometime's then i get hurlled into my own mind. my thought's i can't find. some day's i feel as if i'm BLIND. I'M mean today tommorrow i could be kind. DONT KNO WHICH 1 IT'LL BE MAYB U'LL FIND. LIFe as i see it is hard to explain. i wanna lay n earase my mind n the rain. m i OKAY? or m i INSANE? LIFe as i see it is like no1 else can. My GRAMMY was my biggest fan. LIFe as i see it is distorted most the time. will i be not right today or will i be fine. I wish the sun could BRIGHTEN my day n make my heart SHINE. LIFe as i see it change's everyday. bring her back to me god i pray. I wanna feel the SUN's ray. what else can i say. i just LIVE lif DAy 2 DAy. LIFe as i see it i wish other's could. there's things i cant do that i know i should. TAKE AWAY MY PAIN I WISH SOME1 ELSE COULD.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Moreno Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Congrats Keeley on being featured this week...Raul
Lopez Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Keeley
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Congrats Keeley on your poem being featured this week. Vince
Tugaff Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. Mine is aso featured this week. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 4:19 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 4:55 PM
This is a wonderful poem...congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie
Frye Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 12:42 PM
i love it .......
Hero Aka Hero-Wilson Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 12:40 PM
This is so GOOD! i can relate to it soooooooooo much. Thanks for writing it and I hope it has helped you. Happy Easter my friend-Rhonda Kay
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace